Writing This is what borem bring's you to...

[Darkmoon]

This is just a little something done by me on the last day of school... :p I dun know what I was smokein' (j/k) but this is what came out:

I am the wind,
I am the rain.
I am all the element's,
One and the same.
I am the breath that flows,
The wind that blows.
The light in the sky,
The time that goes by.
I am fire,
I am Hail.
I am crystall,
Beutiful and Frail.
I am the ground you walk on,
The lake's you serf through.
I am known as Mother Nature,
The one that cares for you.


I didn't have a name for it... Didn't know what to call this, so for now it's just called "Mother Nature" (lame title, I know).
Again, I am sorry if you read this. It's horrible and stupid. I dunno why I put it up but I did so deal with it :p.

Here's another one. It's more of a riddle than a poem, but oh well. I'm going to leave out the last line since it's just to... never mind, just read:

I am friends with niether human's or nature.
Not with any element, the supernatural or the fantasy.
I am nither mystery nor mithology.
I am known as a neusence, a bother to all.
I appear when I am not waanted.
I appear as if nothing at all.
I bring downfall's of those loved and hated.
I comsume, I plage, I destroy.
I am known as the evil brought by time as it flows.
I am both hatred and despair, I can be mistaken for love and for care.
I am a deseas, contageouse and deadly.
I can break the mind the soul, your will and your sanity.
Do not fall for my spell, because once you do you may never be the same again.
What am I you may ask?
(---------last line cut------)

So what do you think? I've got alot of free time on my hands don't I? O.o

[size=1]egh, I think I have some big spelling error's in there... Cha, I'll edit out the mistake's later... I dun have much time on the internet today so I'm in a rush :p.[/size]

[Boo]

I really liked the first one.
But the second one less...

I would give:

8.5/10
7.5/10

[Darkmoon]

O.o Poem's such as the one's I put up are not worthy of high rateing's. They deserve lower X-|

Here's another, probably the last I'll ever put up. I've got horrible wrighting skills:

I am a fire that burn's eturnally,
The fire that burn's mystically.
The fire that burn's angrily,
The first that burn's happily.
I am no toy.
I bring new life, hope and joy.
I protect and need protecting.
I love and need loveing.
I breath and need air.
I am alive and strong,
I am weak and I am bold,
I am terrified and I am cold.
I give aswell as take.
I am one with the flame,
The flame is one with me...

[Boo]

I think you write very well!
Keep writing.
Its far better than I could do! Oo

[Sky Moonflow]

You have good writing skills to me all of the pomes are wonderful to me.
9/10
7.7/10
8/10

[Mina]

I love the poems. You must be very good if you can write all that during boredom.
9/10
8.5/10
9/10