Writing Scrawlings...

[ColourDeaf]

We all smile, We all sing.

Turn left up the street,
Nothing but grey concrete
and dead beats,
Grab something to eat
Maccy D's
Or KFC
Only one choice in the city
...
Ok, done voicing my pity
Now let's get down to the nitty gritty
Tune reminds me of my first E
Still think I'm unique
Still 16
Still feeling horny
Point to the sky feel free
See all the people see equal
Smiles in front
and behind me
Swim in the deep blue sea
Cornfields sway lazily
All smiles, all easy
Where you from
what you on
and what's your story?
Mesmirising tone, rising pianos
this is MY zone
stop cloning
Even though me and you are the same
Known you all my life
Don't know your name
The night slowly fades and goes slow motion
and the mesmirising motions
become rising emotions
Is this fleshy ocean
But the same piano loops over
Arms wave, eyes roll back and jaws fall open
All your views are right
All will listen to my plight
So I'll see if I can crash at his place at the end of the night
They could settle wars with this
If only they will
Lords, world leaders and priests on pills
Some many people
So many places you never heard of
Where you from
What's you name
And what you on?
Don't really care
Cos right now
we all smile
we all sing.
Then the girl in the Cafe taps me on the shoulder
I find that it's 5 years on and I'm older
Memories smoulder, winters feel colder
But that same piano loops over
and over
and over
The road shines as the rain washes away
Same chinese takeaway, serving ***t in a tray
Dark all round, walk back down
Same sights, same sounds
but new beats
Solid concrete under my feet
Good, there's no treats
The world stands still as my mind washes round
The washing up bowl of my crown
LLife's been up and down
since i walked from that crowd...

[Raiha]

[COLOr=royalblue]Oh that's good......I like it. And it's very good, because you mentioned KFC. ;)[/COLOR]

[Vegitto4]

I like it. lyrical. it moves well. Throw a beat to it, and you might have a rap, but since i dont like rap, then i can't say