Phantom Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 [color=firebrick][b]A leaf of trust, a branch of pain.[/b] In the choking disastrous calamity of hatred, A life hinders forth like a child stumbling through the hates of hell, It walks with an innocence that bears light upon the corrosive chambers, This hellish cavity of depressive pain, This hellish well, trenched deep without atone. The life of purity wanders forgotten, onwards into the depths of the pit, Yo, has it been time for the life force of virtue to perish?. The Lucifer of a being desires to play a mockery of the foolish life, Giving it a leaf of trust to entangle itself deeper into the snare of this darkness, This hellish darkness, a void in the lightness of faith. The child stumbles hither?confronted undeniably by the demonic visage. ?Hmm, a child? A curse of innocence beith lain upon me?? The demon so did remark, ?Aye, but a child of sacrifice, and indeed I am yours.? She returned without delay, A wonderous present from the useless beings was this demon?s mindseye, He?d given his trust, a leaf of profound faith, to spare the life of this messenger child, The night is told, and the demon laid rest, a peaceful ending in an eternity of distress? The child had pounced, and anchored and won, the child took the course, Split the leaf of trust in one gentle swing, the branch of it?s demise would, Soon bring down the holy return of a life melding faith. The child was no more. The demon was no more. A sacrifice of fate?but change in heart at a branch so foully hidden. Taken..[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Moonflow Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 That is a wonderful poem I give it a 10/10 (I never gave a poem a 10/10 before). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 2, 2003 Author Share Posted January 2, 2003 Thank you! That was more of a ...random blurt of storytelling nothingness..sorta odd, how it worked out. Thanks serendity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BearsBaby635 Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 [color=blue] VEry nice,Bro. I cannot figure out what it means tho....bah oh well. I'de say 10/10 because it's very good. lol. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domon Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 Very impressive. 10/10. I like it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 2, 2003 Author Share Posted January 2, 2003 Sis it is a little story from the back of my mind about a moral that is all too familiar to the world around us. well two, 1. Looks may be decieving. 2. Dont put your trust in strangers. Obviously the demon monster phuck, though since it was merely a child sacrifice, he would let it live for a bit... meanwhile it was actually an assasin to the sortie of course, it merely was sent to kill. Oddly enough, this all was wrote while my mind was officialy declared 'sober' lol....I have problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barra Maral Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 Wow, thats a great poem!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyLynn Posted January 2, 2003 Share Posted January 2, 2003 That was......um..I can't even explain it!!!I love it!!!It was amazing, beautiful, calm, Wow. Mystic's Knight, you have a talent.10/10.Its simply perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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