Phantom Posted January 3, 2003 Share Posted January 3, 2003 My life is so pitiful, Bet you can?t guess what I am?. I cried tonight?why? oh?the she was unloyal.. I cried tonight? I cried my eyes out I cried like a child, I cried like a mother, I cried like an angry father, I cried like a soldier, I cried like never before, I cried like a beast, I cried to never be hurt again.. What is the point of even crying if it takes me no where.. To hell with you all, to hell with all of it? A simple wish of tears and no remorse, I cry for a cause and forget the past, Harrowing in the shadows of pain, I cry, I am a human of weakness, and a lack of innocence.. Betcha couldn?t guess? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Moonflow Posted January 3, 2003 Share Posted January 3, 2003 Ok...that poem has got me confused. You are trying to express some feeling but you speek so confusing that I can not find the feeling that you are trying to say. All I can find is that this is a poem to express being hurt in some way. But I belive I'm wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 3, 2003 Author Share Posted January 3, 2003 To be honest.. I was #@%^ing hurt.. Something happened..life goes on. Your right, I was tryin to get out some sorta pain. Although I think this is the least confusing of the 10,000 words I wrote last night by myself alone in the dark .. It was like a dream of hatred and sound garnisheering of my life. It was unfair and beligerant. I needed release and no matterhow hard I wrote, release my sought freedom, my most needed relinquishment of safety... gosh I only wanted her arms... *looks up into the sky* ...Dont worry.. This poem was more of a "Why dont I just tell the world what Im telling myself inside my useless nutshell of a skull".. sorta thing heh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyLynn Posted January 3, 2003 Share Posted January 3, 2003 I know how you feel .You have 10,000 feelings but you can't write them all down. You want to forget the past but your still mad about the past. I've felt like that, but its all behind me.I think...... Great poem very touching Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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