Writing Forever Borke

[ColourDeaf]

new poem thing...yeah...

Forever Broke.

Take your time
No rush, you know you cant
Life's to short
But longer than we want
Lounge around
Nobody's here
Nobody would want to know if you did
Nobody would care
Take it slow
slower than you think
The Boat's going down
Too tired to swim
Just let it all go
And sink
Take your time with doing nothing
Make sure it's done right
Do it slow
Repeat it, so you might
Look back and say
"Easy enough, no trouble"
And just stare,
Floating in your hazy bubble.
Be shallow,
Be selfish,
Be deep sometimes
Take a moment
Think of...Einstein
And Lao Tzu
And how beautiful your girlfriend is
Me, I'll just be forever broke
Sitting in a personal Bohemian Raphsody
Playing a slow gitaur
Contrast from my life in the city
I want to stay, know I cant
Life's too long
But shorterer than I want
It's time to go.

[Boo]

Its nice. Kind of confusing, but it has something. I dunno what, but it touched me. Good work. Id love to read more :)

[ColourDeaf]

well, i did right some short, SHORT stories...

Getting attention

A man stood on a hill, staring at the universe, wondering at the infinite possibilities out there, at their little part of it, of the huger parts that lay out in that inky blackness between stars, the millions of tiny dramas that may lay out there, with no way that they could find out. He thought of himself, a dot tinier than tiny, on a little blue spinning orb hurtling through space, unnoticed, silent.
Well, no more.
?WE?RE HERE!? he shouted with all his might, half to himself, half to the universe.
The universe replied.
?Watch me care.?
And fell back into silence
Forever.

Twenty questions

You?re here.
Hm?
You?re here.
Where?
You know.
No, I don?t.
Don?t tell me you DON?T KNOW
Why else would I be asking you?
Well?you should?
Why?
It?s pretty important
Why?s that
It?s pretty much a milestone in someone?s life.
So, where am I?
C?mon, just think.
Wedding?
No
Anniversary?
No
Birthday party?
No
Retirement party?
No
Funeral?
Sort of.
Huh?
Look up.
Why?
You?ll see
I don?t think I can.
Just try.
What will I see?
Stop playing twenty questions and just do it.
He looked up
The pearly gates stood before him.

The Answer

The man walked by his girlfriend, drinking in the moment of their walk in the park. He looked at her and saw the real mystery she was wrapped in. He leaned over and finally asked the question all men wanted to know
?What is it you women want??
She turned to him and study him with deep brown eyes.
?You sure you want to know??
He nodded and she leant over, softly whispering in his ear. Behind his eyes it looked like glass shattering.
He ran screaming into the night.

Taking a dive

He couldn?t take it any more. That was it, that was the last straw. He looked down at the water from the Golden Gate bridge, ignoring the honks of the drivers behind him. He leant forwards a bit more, the wind rushing through his hair and making him feel he was flying. Ten yards to his right a women jumped into the air, following an almost identical path. They turned and something clicked as they saw each other, it was chemistry, it was true, unconditional, life-long love.
They saw this ten feet from the water.

[Boo]

They are a lil confusing too, but they are very nice other than that. the third one was kinda funny too :p