Shaun Posted January 27, 2003 Share Posted January 27, 2003 Awesome stuff! What happens next?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankie Posted February 4, 2003 Author Share Posted February 4, 2003 It was that afternoon when Jessie woke up from a much needed nap. A couple little kids blinked at her as they watched her wake up. She leaned up and stared at the dirty faces. She smiled and slowly walked out of the little quickly built hut. Oryan was not around and Jessie felt alone. She wandered over to the river and leaned over the bridge and stared at her reflection. She was pretty beaten up looking. She figured she didn?t look as bad as Oryan though. A fish jumps sending a small splash into the air followed by ripples. Her reflection drifted apart and as the water calmed it slowly came back into focus. A black eye and a few bruises but nothing serious. Her head hurt from when the dragon slammed her into the wall. She felt a bit dizzy still but to her that was nothing. ?So quiet out here. I wonder if I?ll ever get home?? She sighed. Her reflection slowly faded as she walked off. She slowly strides through the tall grass and finds a nice place to lie down. Spreading out she relaxed and watched the clouds drift slowly by. The wind blew her hair across her face gently. She hears the sound of wings and suspected a bird of some kind. Suddenly the noise got to loud to be any bird. Jessie leaned up and looked towards the valley and saw the dragon fly at a high speed over her head and towards the rest of the village. ?Dredus?? Jessie sneered as she quickly stood up and headed after it. The dragons speed picked up and he was out of sight in no time. By the time Jessie got to the village it was ruins. Standing in the middle of it was Dredus. He had a very angry look on his face as if he was looking for something he can?t find. ?Dredus what are you doing?? Jessie ran up to him and got in his path. ?None of your business. Oh look the poor defenseless Jessie all alone. Where could Oryan be?? Dredus laughed as he looked at the destruction around him. ?He went somewhere early this morning, and I?m not defenseless.? Jessie scowled at him. Dredus glared at her and took his left arm and raised it quickly. He brought it down quickly to send Jessie flying but she dodged and grabbed his arm. With a swift movement she flung him to the ground. Dredus glared up at her and quickly knocked her to the ground by knocking her feet from under her. ?Quick but not quick enough?? Dredus leaped up and kicked Jessie. ?Augh! What do you want anyways?? She sputtered ?Did you not read the wall? Revenge! Not to mention there?s a special stone that will make me all powerful?Once I find it? I will rule. I will use you to rule your world as well. So be great full im not killing you right now.? --------------------------------------------- another part of part 7 its not to good but then again... im writeing it from school right now soooooooo not much i can think of over the chatter.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted February 5, 2003 Share Posted February 5, 2003 I know I've said it before, but I love it! Its absolutely kick buttish! Heh I wish I could write like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankie Posted February 9, 2003 Author Share Posted February 9, 2003 im giving up on this for now... i got so many other thigns going on in life..... UGH... i dont have the brain space to think about my life.... think about..... certin people AND write at the same time.. so i give up on this for now and bryan you can ... but not in htis style... i have seen somehting you did a while back i cant write like that your good too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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