941_1432310904 Posted January 5, 2003 Share Posted January 5, 2003 Slipping Slipping I hold on to the thoughts and hold on to the rage Its doesnt matter what you say I hate the world either way Whispers in the wind Bloodstains on the wall Pushing myself to the edge Its JUST another fall {I} colored all my days purple And drained the depth out of life Confined to my soul Hours upin hours filled with endless strife What you say [matters] What they think harms Oh there goes that girl With scars upon her arms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bing Posted January 6, 2003 Share Posted January 6, 2003 [size=1][color=darkblue] You seem like you've got alot of anger inside of you. I like it, is it meant to be a song? It would sound good as a verse in a rock song. I like it's, it has depth. [/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Yu Hakusho! Posted January 6, 2003 Share Posted January 6, 2003 You sound really depressed....are you alright? 0_o Actually, you do sound more angry than depressed. Maybe not. But at least you can express your emotions through you words! That's a true gift! ^_^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spike speigel Posted January 11, 2003 Share Posted January 11, 2003 Nice poem. I like it. As stated before, it seems to hold some anger in it. Is that the case? Wether(sp?) or not, it's still really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted January 11, 2003 Share Posted January 11, 2003 Its good. Like AB asked: Is it meant for a song? Cause it seems like a rock song. Especially when I look in my LP lyrics. (like: "I wasted it all [just to watch you go!]" and then the other continues, that stuff) :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
941_1432310904 Posted January 11, 2003 Author Share Posted January 11, 2003 No, its just a poem, sorry i havent replyed sooner,my computer crashed and stuff, and then i had to put all the stuff on it again... No it was just made as a poem, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
941_1432310904 Posted January 11, 2003 Author Share Posted January 11, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Yu Yu Hakusho! [/i] [B]You sound really depressed....are you alright? 0_o Actually, you do sound more angry than depressed. Maybe not. But at least you can express your emotions through you words! That's a true gift! ^_^; [/B][/QUOTE] Its Really just anger, when i get mad, i express it heh, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
p3rfuk3ed Posted January 11, 2003 Share Posted January 11, 2003 Hi ash i finally got this thing & i am slowly learning how to use it hhahah, well i love ur writting post more, baiii <3 Ashley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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