Talon Posted January 6, 2003 Share Posted January 6, 2003 [color=teal][i]A sister, a brother, latter sentenced to Hell While the former goes free, ringing love's bell. A mistake made once, twice, maybe three times, Sentenced the Cloud to live in dark rhymes. In the land of Avalon, a chamber awaits, a black bed, a white one, both tied to their fates. Brother and sister slept in the Chamber of Rose, Where both, in their lessons, recited Poetry and Prose. Now, Cloudrunner has fallen astray Yet fate turns about and his sister must pay! He takes the Blade of Shadows instead of her, Soul ripped from his body, his worst nightmares recur. However, with heart for her foul-sentenced twin, Starkeeper returns his soul with little chagrin. Whilst Star holds her lover in the chamber for four, A Goddess loves Cloud, her love to no longer ignore. Whilst fate shines kind on the gentle, young Star Cloud loses the Goddess, can't love from afar. His tears stain his cheeks in wet, silver streams, Though soon sister comes and heals his heart's seams. The mortal Star loves shall hold her forever, Whilst Cloud must go on, knowing through the sight of the clever. He'll find his love in the heart of the rain, Where freedom, his passion, shall greet him again![/i] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is the sequel to my poem in Mystic Knight's thread "At the Gates of Avalon".[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 6, 2003 Share Posted January 6, 2003 JESUS ****ING GOD.. I wish I could rhyme like that....God damned me to hell for being merely a freeverse poet. Thats pretty good....When you told me about never telling you know who that your love-to-be-torn was you know who. hehe.. I THOUGHT you were saying that my love was "the" you know who. lol... but I finaly get it.. .your love will the YOU DEFINATELY KNOW WHO. Youl be torn from her but, if she is THE you know who...she cant die.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted January 6, 2003 Author Share Posted January 6, 2003 [color=teal]*sigh* Yes....I am cursed, but I am sure I shall resolve this. I WILL change my fate! Ah, well. Oh yeah, and Mike, Dani's not my love-to-be-torn. I lost all chance of that a long time ago, and I'm not bitter. Just be good to her.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 7, 2003 Share Posted January 7, 2003 I was reffering to the Godess ... *shakes head* Gah, dont be so worrysome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted January 8, 2003 Share Posted January 8, 2003 [color=darkred]Wow, Etarah. I just...wow. I can't criticise this. But...wow. Great work.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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