Yu Yu Hakusho! Posted January 6, 2003 Share Posted January 6, 2003 This is my first one....tell me what you think. And maybe it's not a real Haiku....but it proably doesn't make much sense....^_^; Through my window I can see The Cherry Blossom Tree In the moonlight it shines Blending with the Earth The pink is much more than a color It is the feeling you get when you see it Through your window In the moonlight ACK!! I hope you guys think it isn't as stupid as I think it sounds.....0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted January 7, 2003 Share Posted January 7, 2003 Hey good job! I actually enjoyed it! Good work! Keep at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyLynn Posted January 8, 2003 Share Posted January 8, 2003 Same I think its very interesting and cute.^_^ Sakura trees are very pretty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Yu Hakusho! Posted January 16, 2003 Author Share Posted January 16, 2003 Thank you. Someone actually does read this stuff.....0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Musahi Posted January 17, 2003 Share Posted January 17, 2003 [size=1]It's fairly decent. Nice for your first try. [b]But[/b] haikus are only 3 lines long.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Yu Hakusho! Posted January 17, 2003 Author Share Posted January 17, 2003 I know....but most Haiku's aren't supposed to make much sense and mine didn't. We were learining about them the other day in Language Arts and they said that they don't HAVE to be 3 liners. Some famous ones were longer than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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