Zidargh Posted January 14, 2003 Share Posted January 14, 2003 [SIZE=1][COLOR=darkblue]Hmm, in an english Literature class today, we have been studying poetry, so I may aswell have an attempt while my motivation lasts.[/COLOR][/SIZE] [SIZE=1][COLOR=darkblue]From a wooden balcony, In a Mountain Pass, I see a sight that appears to last before me. That current gast of fresh wind, A breath of heaven, Scurries along the scenic route. A Herbal Essence behind me, And a greenery of gold, Confuses me beyond eternity. I turn, But am then drawn near, To what seems to be a picture. An awakening from a previous battle, An ending from a partners sleep, I journey on to see that rattle, And hope this gift is for mine to keep.[/COLOR][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bing Posted January 14, 2003 Share Posted January 14, 2003 [size=1][color=darkblue][quote]A Herbal Essence behind me[/quote] Some sort of strange poem about Shampoo. No, it's really deep, and I like it loads. It paints pictures in my brain. Do some more while your creative motivation lasts[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy Vercetti Posted January 14, 2003 Share Posted January 14, 2003 Thats a very detailed piece there i think you are very good at poetry and you should carry on writing it you would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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