Writing A poem i made in English.

[Tommy Vercetti]

In my english class i was asked to write a poem about a picture it was either these 5 cowboy bandits or this women at a station so i chose the women at the station and it is called Isolated and i kind of rushed the ending so if anyone wants to help me out and make it more interesting that would be cool thanks :)

Isolated

Sitting here in another world
Isolated from everyone around me
A tear rolls down my ice cold face
crying for a loved one
My mind is racing, why did it happen?

All the good memories are slipping
I felt the hate rise up in me
That one dreadful night which can't be changed
My hands are shaking uncontrolably
Like the night when i picked up that kitchen knife.

If only he hadn't walked through that door
He stood there with his back to me
Unaware of what was about to happen
What happened next can't be described
The knife shot through the air like a bullet from a gun.

I grabbed the knife and pulled it out his back
Blood was dripping off my hands
My face was twisted with anger, I dropped the knife and fled
I never wanted to return, my guilt was overwhelming me.
I have finally snapped back to reality
The train is just about to arrive and i haven't moved yet.
When I leave my life will begin again in and isolated place
where there is no fear or guilt.

Well that was my poem that i made up from a picture i hoped you all liked it.

[Bing]

[size=1][color=darkblue][quote]I felt the hate rise up in me[/quote] Heh, ye olde Slipknot there! Marty, did Weh (Russ) have any input into this poem? The end is really good. I never knew you where so poetic. I'm really surprised, and even more impressed! Well done! *pat on back*[/color][/size]