941_1432310904 Posted January 15, 2003 Share Posted January 15, 2003 I dunno i was bored what do u think?! plz leave ur Coments or Critism [B]Slits[/B] Carving into my flesh, my skin's not that tough Look at me bleed, such an adrenaline rush For me can't you see, I love my skin when it's flushed Don't say it's corrupt, you don't know, so shut the F*** up These slits on my wrists excellent skin splits and then it's Bleedin, oh it's intriguing, see it drip I can hold pain in my fist My fears running through my veins, dripping out through Tears and temporary pain, it's so engaging, me facing What's haunted me through the years, far gone from blood and tears When Dawn comes I'll still be here to weep and bleed my fears. I live on through the years Weeping blood and tears This pain exiled through slits My only temporary outlet. They say if you cut you've lost your fragile mind What they don't know besides it's f***ed is that we're just fine There's just a lotta **** buried inside of us all our lives Burning and hurting until there's no more room inside For it to run and hide, until we have no more tears to cry At night, when it pains us so much we just wanna lie there and die That's why we pierce and slash, trying to get rid of the ashes Still blazing from this attack, when we can no longer fight back And one day maybe you'll understand just who it is that I am inside Even Superman will cry tonight, these slits are all that keep me alive. I live on through the years Weeping blood and tears This pain exiled through slits My only temporary outlet. [B]bruises[/B] My face is flaming from your acid words This fire burning down my throat I can no longer cope, there's more pain than hope Lying awake, this welt left on my cheek All because I let a solitary tear leak. Purple welt from your abuse I feel so lost and confused I have nothing but a bruise. Today cradles Tomorrow in her hands But what happens when she lets it drop? Jagged edges lost, dreams no longer talk My face kissed by lavender and rose What lies under a bruise no one knows. Purple welt from your abuse I feel so lost and confused I have nothing but a bruise. This swelling will never go down Blood circulates through my viens Under frail Pain, running with Shame My pillow soaked with tears of mine Absorbing the bruises I carry inside. Purple welt from your abuse I feel so lost and confused I have nothing but a bruise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
p3rfuk3ed Posted January 15, 2003 Share Posted January 15, 2003 Nice poem Ash keep them coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bing Posted January 15, 2003 Share Posted January 15, 2003 [size=1][color=darkblue] BraceletWhore, when ever I read your work, I always put your lyrics into a song in my head. I think you should persue with song lyrics, as your poetry work is great, but I think it would flow better as a rock/metal song.[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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