Writing The Giant Book of Zombies

[Duo Maxwell]

I was reading Naomi's Giant book of Zombies yesterday and there's this one story "The taking of Mr. Bill" when she told me the title of it I was practically on the ground laughing for reasons no one 'cept Naomi, E and a few others know. The taking of Mr. Bill was a bout a killer who rapes Mothers or Nanny's and taked their children, then he steals their souls and sends them to Haiti to a Gypsy type person cause she made a deal with him that if he sends her fresh souls he would be young forever. He killed young baby boys. The guy was Polish and his name was Piotr Pan, now do we see any sort of connection here with Peter Pan? Little children that never grow up because they were killed, when you think about it what do you get? The lost boys. Piotr used a bailing-hook to cut away the dresses that the Mothers or Nanny's were wearing, so we get Captain Hook. The taking of Mr. Bill actually mentions Peter Pan and their reletivities when the Mother of William, whom just got stolen and killed went to ask her uncle what he ment when he said to her on the night when he got abducted "Don't forget the Pan." and he ended up telling her about him and his history and how he tried to steal him from his Nanny when he was young too. Its a cool story I recomend you read it and if you have what did you think of it?