Writing For the inuyasha fans

[vegeta rocker]

Since there seems to be an abundance of Inuyasha fans running around everywhere, i decided to give one about Sango a shot. I wrote this right after she loses her family.

Sango's Song of Sorrow

I never thought
it could end this way
the night covers my heart
like a blanket of snow

how i will miss you
i do already
though your grave is
still bloody

a feeling of loathsome
sorrow
pours from my eyes
as i claw my way
out of my
own

such a sight
no one so young
should never have
to see

yet how is it
you were younger
than i

fire screams
through my veins
dying down only with
reassurances of revenge

what the white
masked shadow
promised
is

revealed as a
more senseless
hell

Once again
swearing revenge
new allies are forged
for a demon
is never truly alone
in forests as deep
as this

an agenda of
his own
hides the tears
that he never
seems to be able to stop

he too lost
love
of a dear one

diffrent than my own
yet
just as
true

the other bearing
a burden
hidden by a
humor

as dry as my bleak heart
and twice as
heavy

fairy tales are
never strung by a
single string

but are woven
together
through many lamenting hearts

so, inuyasha fans, is it worthy?

[Guest sixthcrusifix]

That is very nice.
your poem, cold like ice,
love with so much hate,
sense without debate
wonder without rhyme
it will stand the tests of time...
I promise
-sixy
8^)