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Senses gone insane


Silent Death
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Can't see...
Blinded by society

Can't hear...
Sounds and voices drowned out by fear

Can't touch...
Emotions and feelings blocked out by memories and such

Can't taste...
Trapped in ths desolate place

Can't Smell...
Lungs bleeding, under a spell

Can't speak...
Growing weak, coming upon sanity's peak

One step over the edge...
Mind and senses dyes out

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The last two stanzas define the poem. The guy in the poem is on the brink of insanity. Is this poem any good?
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