Phantom Posted January 26, 2003 Share Posted January 26, 2003 [color=royal blue][i][center][font=arial][size=1]I wait in my patience I try to be calm Feels like forever See the strain in my palm? I wait in my silence I try to breathe slow Feels like I'm crippled But nobody knows I wait in your absence I try to stay buoyant Feels like I'm drowning But I know that I can't. I wait for my finale I try to hold tight Feels good to be so strong In this solemn night I wait in my patience I try to touch at my love Feels eternal, aeonic and warm Oh so silken, much like dove Sent from one Goddess above Down to restore me with one gentle shove Surrounds me with harmony, much like a glove With the swipe of a finger, to find me my love[/color][/i][/center][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted January 30, 2003 Share Posted January 30, 2003 I like it, it has such a deep feeling of something i can't quite get. I don't get sadness, more like lonliness. Looking for that one true thing, you know? Waiting for something that seems like foreve, the whole time wondering if it is worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted January 31, 2003 Share Posted January 31, 2003 [color=crimson][size=1] You've made quite a name to live up to, Mike. Nice quality. Good job. ^_^[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted January 31, 2003 Author Share Posted January 31, 2003 huh!? *sighs* me no get sis. Whatcha mean Evy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted January 31, 2003 Share Posted January 31, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mist [/i] [B][color=crimson][size=1] You've made quite a name to live up to, Mike. Nice quality. Good job. ^_^[/color][/size] [/B][/QUOTE] [color=red] :Gapes mouth:....She's alive... Good job Mike. It shows good thought, and nice rhythm to match. Keep 'em comin'.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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