Sui Generis Posted January 28, 2003 Share Posted January 28, 2003 Ok this is a school assignment, we had to make a poem for our English class and I know its not good but bear with me here. Just wanted to know if you think it'd be ok. Like if I would get a decent grade...The requirements were it had to be associated to school, and it had to be exacatly 20 lines long...so here goes nothing... "Physical Education 101" The sweat trickling down your back The whistle blowing in your ear The kids around you gasping for breath and some even shedding a simple tear "Welcome to P.E," the man shouts "I know you feel like you're about to collapse" "But don't worry you'll be fine." "Now go on, twenty more laps" The seconds tick by slow as an hour, As you run around the basketball court Finally you finish your teacherouse journey Only to find out, there is more of that sort Fifty push-ups one-hundred cruches! Slowly you do them, one by one. Forty-eight, forty-nine Fifty, you're finally done. Now its time to pick the teams! You look around and you're the last one. Bumps and bruises are the prizes for this game, And to think some peopls said PE was fun.... Ok I know its not the greatest, did it in about oh 10 minutes...uhm....suggestions...I know its ify Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankie Posted January 28, 2003 Share Posted January 28, 2003 pretty good if i wrote a poem about PE it would be too enappropriet for the boards or school even Hehe Not bad... but thats my poetry champion speaking.... *sigh* School turned me into a wuss.... teacher thought i was the best for the sort... so she signed me up for the poetry competition thing along with my team mate ... but he dident do much... i got the award mostly by myself... I try to forget the horror of it all But oh well Thats pretty good.. I dotn do powems that ryhme though... to odd for me... i dont feel comfortable doing them.... but this is pretty good for someone who hasent... written poetry much.... as i susspect anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted January 28, 2003 Share Posted January 28, 2003 Heh. And you said I was awesome at poems. w00t! Good work ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted January 29, 2003 Share Posted January 29, 2003 [color=009966]'Tis the sad truth about PE....V_V But luckily, I don't have to take PE! :p [size=1]yet, anyway.....[/size]>.>;;[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted January 29, 2003 Share Posted January 29, 2003 Man, waht's wrong wit you people? I LOVE PE. It's the darn greatest! w00t! Long live PE. But health class? It can burn! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankie Posted January 29, 2003 Share Posted January 29, 2003 ........ PE AND HOMWORK .. those are the 2 forbiddein things at the privet school i go to.. MWAHAHAH everyone wants to go to my school but they dont know the sad truth about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted January 29, 2003 Share Posted January 29, 2003 Yeah. No homework sounds SWEE-EEEET! But unfortunately, you also don't have PE so no way. That stuff roxorz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biida Posted January 30, 2003 Share Posted January 30, 2003 [color=skyblue] Bryuo, I believe thats one of the most truthful poems I've ever heard in my life. I love it. ^_^ My only criticism is that you could work a bit more at getting it more in time... some lines seem too long; some too short. And that you need to use spell check. :bluesweat Just stuff that's simple to correct. ^^; Aight. I'm done. *Burns her PE teacher, then walks off* [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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