Writing DN Angel - Spirit Within

[Azzi]

Here is a DN Angel story I wrote. Please be kind, I'm not much of a writer. O.o. Look [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=346381]here[/URL] for pictures of Dark and Daisuke (Dark - Blue hair, Daisuke, red hair)
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DN Angel : Spirit Within
Author's note: I created this story from a Japanese magna comic, that I particularly like. Anyways, I used the basics, but it is set a year later from the comics, when Daisuke is 15. Enjoy!

Chapter 1 : Release

Mika bent down and read her magazine. Her mother was beside her balancing Mika's little sister Lillie on her knee, and her father was finding the family's luggage. "I hate moving to Japan!" Mika sign melodramatically. "I wanted to stay in America, but could I no! Because of some job transfer!". Mika's mother laughed softly. "You know that job meant a lot to dad, and also, this is your grandfather's homeland. You are quarter Japanese, you know. Besides, now we have a bigger house and you wont share with Lillie any more. at least there's one perk to this boring trip, I wont have to share with Lillie any more. Lillie tugged at Mika's scarf. "leamme alone!" she said impatiently to the two year old. Lillie sniffed indignantly and turned away.
"Where's daddy?" she demanded. Whilst her mother explained to the child, Mika stared down at her magazine, not really reading it. Her long honey brown hair fell down on her shoulders. her almond shaped eyes brimmed with tears. "I know I'll hate it here!" she said softly, a tear trickling down her cheek. She carelessly wiped it away and turned her face away, pretending to be scanning the airport instead of crying. Mika felt at her neck for her pendant, which was a tiny crystal orb her eccentric grandmother gave her. Mika's grandmother was her best friend, always listened to Mika's littlest problems, and always helped her with wise kind words. Her grandmother believed in spirits, and just before she died, she gave Mika the crystal pendant, believing it to be a radar of the inner spirit. Mika didn't believe this, but she always kept the pendant, to remind her of her grandmother. was at the mountains. Her dad drilled in it and attached a string through--it had been Mika's comfort whenever she was upset. She clung to the orb's smooth shiny surface, allowing more tears to flow. "I'm going to the bathroom" she mumbled, staggering away. "Don't be too long, Mika, okay?" her mom replied.

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Daisuke panted as he ran to his school. He was surprised to notice everyone from his class huddled in a corner of the schoolyard. He made his way over, and peeped through the coat and scarf clad kids, and saw the Harada twins. "Hi Daisuke!" Riku cried, pushing through some kids. "Um..hi." Daisuke mumbled, blushing. "Guess what! We?re leaving for Kyoto today! We were allowed to say last goodbye." "So soon?" Daisuke blurted out, feeling bummed out that Riku was going so quickly. "Yes." she said softly. "Risa is being worshipped one last time" she said, indicating to her twin sister with a gloved hand. Daisuke eyes darted from Riku's to Risa's. The two looked identical; except Risa wore her long brown hair long and Riku had short hair. Daisuke was attracted to Risa at first, but she was too much of an airhead and she didn't like him anyway, just Dark. Riku on the other hand, was the only friend who believed him about Dark, and knew why weird things were always happening to him. They were Dark's "jokes" She was also intelligent and concerned about things like animal extinction and global warming, where Risa's main problems were spilt ends.. Any feelings he had for Risa were lethal. Whenever he even thought of her now, Dark grew stronger. When Dark was stronger, Daisuke was reduced to a little voice in he back of Dark's mind, and he grew taller, older with dark blue hair, instead of his short self, with unruly crimson hair and eyes. Whenever he thought of Riku, Dark was pulled further away from any possible strength. Dark was a criminal--an unstoppable art thief. Daisuke had tried everything to stop Dark, mainly to save his reputation and the art galleries. Risa was making her way to him, so Daisuke ran off. "Daisuke!" Risa said, disgustedly. "He's such a freak, Riku" she muttered to her sister. "I don't know what you see in him." Riku flushed, and turned away. "I don't like him that way." she said, but Risa had wandered off.

Daisuke leaned back against the wall, catching his breath. "That...was...close!" he panted. He could
feel Dark's rage in his mind, but shut it away. "I'm..going to win!" he said triumphantly. "Drrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnnnggggggggggggg!" a loud noise clang above his head. Class time. Daisuke ran across the yard to the main door. "Bye Risa!" a girl cried, waving like crazy. Risa held up her head, and waved to her 'fans' regally. The twins climbed in a car, with bags tied onto the roof. "If they're going for ever, Dark will never some out again!" don't count on it kid, I have tons of experience, I'll release myself from this wimpy cage you call your body, with or without that babe, Risa. Daisuke hummed a tune, trying to muffle Dark's words. "No you won't" he whispered fiercely. Some people turned to stare at him, and he reddened and scurried to his locker. Despite his brave words, he knew Dark had his tactics, of escape. He didn't want to think about Dark anyway. He slid through the door of his class, and settled at a table by himself. "

[Dragon Warrior]

I've never read the manga, but this is nifty anyways. Good job. *thumbs up* Yeeeeaaahhh!!!