Talon Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 [color=teal]It gets tough, still we take to the street. Just some men and our will to survive. So many times, it happens too fast, you trade your fire for heat. You must strive just to remain alive. Going the distance, moving too fast. Somehow we end, lost, alone. Still we fight, ignoring the choices of the past. Completeing the tapestry of failure we have sewn. No matter what, it happens too fast, never giving a light. Keeping it real, moving us all ahead. Still we go on, ignoring the heat, living inside an ungiving fight. My comrades fall, leaving me alone, vision shifting to red. It happens so fast, I fall amidst my dreams. I never gave up, conquered the fall. My life is no longer apart at its seams. Because of courage, I have saved us all....[/color] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The story of a man who only knew how to fight, and with his gang saved his neighborhood, yet died with his friends keeping their dream from dying like they did...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tursi Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 nice, i like it. it's tells the story well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasrai Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 [COLOR=green]Awesome I Love it! It does tell the story well. Very well, done.:D [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 [color=red] Much better this time 'round. All though it still is a little tad too short for my liking, and could've been a tad bit deeper, this isn't that bad. 7/10. ;)[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 [font=gothic][color=crimson]For a minute there I thought you'd gone strange and started writing song lyrics for some reason... I'm not one for that kind of mentality, but I appreciate the quality.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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