Writing my Resident Evil novel begining.

[Domon]

[COLOR=darkred][i]It has been a week since Claire and Chris Redfield escaped from the Antartic Base that Umbrella Inc. controlled. Now that they had escaped, Clarie and Chris made plans to meet up with Leon, Jill, Rebecca, Barry, and Carlos. Today would be the day that Umbrella would pay for what they had done to Raccoon City and all the other innocent people that they had conducted their sick and twisted experiments on. They ahd decided to stop in Paris and meet up with Jill and Co. before they headed for the Umbrella main base in a seaside city in France.

As soon as Claire stepped out of the car she and her brother had rented she felt a slight breeze playing with her hair which was in her usual ponytail, she sighed, she had survived what seemed like a living hell repeating itself over and over again, but what really made being in the Antartci and Rockfort Island a hell was when the sick and deranged ***** Alexia Ashford injected Steve with some virus that turned him into a monster that had nearly killed her but before he struck her his human side kicked in and saved her but in turn he was killed. He looked at her while she cradled his head in her hands and said. "Claire, I'm sorry I couldn't keep my promise. Claire, I love you Claire." After he spoke these words he expired from a severe injury. Chris stepped out of the car and saw a distant look on his sister's face, the look you get when you lose something or someone very dear to you. "I'm sorry Claire." He said as he placed a reassuring hand on her shoulder, she turned to him with her eyes welling up with tears. "I swear Chris, I will make Umbrella pay for this." She said as the tears streamed down her face in hot salty rivers. The two then climbed into the car again and drove into Paris.[/i]
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Well?? What do you think? Its still a work in process, just wanted some input.[/COLOR]

[JJ]

this is good. Nice work.