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[color=darkred]My two newest pieces. Swoloof and Nerves. C & C, ratings etc etc. I thought they turned out quite well, but you guys may tell me different. Looking forward to hearing everyone's views... except for certain people who lie about being in graphics battles with me and then saying they won when I haven't even battled them...in fact apart from these boards I haven't seen you anywhere else...thank God. :D :D

Enjoy viewing these two pieces as much as I did making them...

[u][i][b]Swoloof[/b][/i][/u]
[img]http://kojin.250free.com/swoloof.jpg[/img]


[u][i][b]Nerves[/b][/i][/u]
[img]http://kojin.250free.com/nerves%20copy.jpg[/img][/color]
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[b][color=003399]I don't like the Swoloof as much as I like the Nerves picture. The Swoloof just looks like it's gone through some bad blending options, while the Nerves picture looks like it's gone through some excellent ones.

*shakes fist at the one's superior abilities* Ahem.[/b][/color]
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[color=darkred]*moon walks* Thank you :D.

I thought up the names so as when you saw the picture the name would be the verbal representation of what you were seeing. So with Nerves, what I see looks to me like virtual nerve endings...and with Swoloof...it just seemed to fit.[/color]
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I'm scared.... please lay off of the filters... and erm burn.. and all those funky things...

The first one: the typo to the right looks nice, though lose the whole echo effect.. the one to the left.. hell no. The rest is big no no.... I don't like it.

The second one: I like the typo and the effects surrounding it.. Then you decide to add some color. Hell no, I'm scared shitless.... Please, stop before I get a migraine.
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[COLOR=DARKRED]...I didn't use the burn tool, or anything else but my 3DS MAX renders and some of my photoshop stuff...

If by the echo effect you mean the whole radial blur in the background thing I added, yes, I agree with you, it looks a bit tacky. The white swirls are the whole theme of the piece so I hope you weren't talking about those.

I actually removed the color from around the typography, I didn't add color to the rest...If it wasn't for color I think our lives would be relativelyt boring. I like color in my pieces, but maybe, just for you, I should make a black and white piece :p.

Also, I suggest you avoid any further works by me that include a warning about brightness, you seem to be phtosensitive or something...[/color]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jenni [/i]
[B]I'm scared.... please lay off of the filters... and erm burn.. and all those funky things...

The first one: the typo to the right looks nice, though lose the whole echo effect.. the one to the left.. hell no. The rest is big no no.... I don't like it.

The second one: I like the typo and the effects surrounding it.. Then you decide to add some color. Hell no, I'm scared shitless.... Please, stop before I get a migraine. [/B][/QUOTE]

I agree totally. Apart from the typo, different font would help IMO.
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