Writing Journey of the Sun

[Vilearchangemon]

Hey,it's my second fic!I hope you'll enjoy this!






Journey of the Sun
Part 1: The Warrior of One Million Years

" What's going on!" Alone,a warrior stood before 5 opposing mechanical beasts.Crying in pain,the warrior glew a saddened blue color."Be catuious men,we don't know what he'll do",one the beast's pilot called to another.How did I get here!Is all that traveled through through the lone warrior's mind.What did I do to recive this pain!The warrior's mind faded to white.........


"Hey,Justice,you going to sleep forever!",a voice called to his groggy headed friend.Justice lifted his head."Go away,Doro.maybe I will." "Come on!!Did you forget!"Doro shouted. "What!" Justice shot back."Mast is leaving today on his journey to join the Impalica Army" Doro told his forgetful friend."Oh,crap,that's right!I'll be out in two seconds!" Justice shouted,jumping from bed."That's more like it" Doro smirked,leaving.In a new record,Justice was out in two seconds.Mast was still gathering supplies by the time the two 16 year olds got to him."Why,there you two are!"Mast exclaimed,glad to get to see his two best pupils before he left."Yeah,stupid over there forgot you were leaving today."Doro said,pointing to Justice." Shut up!"Justice shot,knuckleing the back of Doro's head."Well,the important thing is you met me here before I left." Mast put forth,being a peace maker.Ther three men smiled at each other."What shall we do on are last hour together" Mast questioned,breaking the silence.
Punch,kick,elbow block.The only way the three could express their sarrow for parting was a fight.The yung men did well against there master.They had to double team him,but numbers have power.Mast pulled back,storing energy in his fist." Go,Flash Fist!" Mast charges forth.Hitting and knocking Doro out.Justice starred in awe as Mast stored more energy and charge." you won't get me!Guided Shot",Justice shouted,charging energy in his right palm.He let loose a small ball of whit light.It hit mast head on,breaking his defense.Justice took advantage of this by jumping in and delivering a double kick while still in the air.Mast fell to the groung,defeted.So did Justice."Where did you learn to do that,Justice!I didn't see that coming." Mast commented."I'm......don't........remember...........too.........tired!" Justiced replied with a yawn.
"Well,good bye Lora! i will miss all your people." Mast called back,about 50 meters away from the town.Soon he was gone from sight,for the last time." Well,Justice,lets go get some food." Doro called to his friend." Right....what the he..." Justice was cut short by 8 flying Mechanical Beasts."Ohhh my God,Gears!"
"I think we better hold out on the food"Justice called his friend as they starred to the deadly sky.

HAHAHAHAHH!Cliff hanger!if you haven't ralized,Justice is the main Charcter.I hope to have the next chapter tomarrow.Please reveiw!

[Ifra]

I really dont know what my opinion means to you, but i thought that was quite good

[Vilearchangemon]

Journey of the Sun
Part 2: Fight for Freedom!Blazing Fists!


"What's going on!",Doro called in awe."I don't know,move!",Justice shouted,dodgeing bullets."This village is of no use,destroy it.Then go for the sword." One of the pilots called to the others.Justice and Doro decided in their minds that it would best for them to speak.They took off for the Shrine of the Forgotten Soul......

"Justice,go for the sword.I'll stay here." ,Doro called.Justice nodded.He ran throught the shrine,reaching the center in barely any time.He them found what he was looking for.Lodged in a crystal was the legandary sword,Crisara.He reach for it,ready to pull.To his surprise,it came out rather easiley.He admired it for a moment,them grab it's crystal sheath,and ran for the exit.He was struck by horror at the exit.The village was set ablaze,and troops were at the gate,fighting Doro.One pulled a gun."Doro!",Justice shouted,a moment too late.Doro laid in a pool of his own blood.Justice fell to the ground sobbing."You.....You....I'll kill you!"Justice shouted charging for the group of soilders.He met the first three with a quick sweep,followed by rapid punches.They fell to the ground,out cold.The rest grabed for there guns,but were horified to find they had been cut in two.Justice stood ,sword in hand."He has the sword,call for re....".The solider sprawed out on the ground,dead.The remaining six reached for their swords.Justice put away his sword and charge energy in his right palm.He rapidly fire twelve shots,killing the remaining six.The gears had retreated,probly to refuel.Justice didn't care about that.He starred his dead friend.He walked over to him,and picked him up."This is my fault.If I would have come out faster.....Damn it!!!!"Justice walked to his village.No one lived.Justice placed Doro on the bench where the boys had played as kids.He began to sobb.He finally arose,going to salvage supplies.He found little but what he needed.He knew what he needed to do.He would hunt down the leader of the ones who did this.Hell,the whole army.He would get his revenge.He wound protect this sword.That was his mission.Leaving,he looked back one more time,he saw his dead friend.[I]Good bye my old friend.Godspeed.[/I]

Poor Justice. Thank you Ifra for your reveiw.I hope i get more off this chapter.

[TheShinje]

That was quite a moving story, good plot wists and supercharged emotion! Usually it's hard to keep me interested in a story, so you did well to do that ;)

Poor Justice, losing his friend :(

I like the story.