Queen Asuka Posted February 24, 2003 Share Posted February 24, 2003 [color=hotpink][size=1]Here's something I wrote for all of my friends on the Otaku. [center][b]*SUNSHINE*[/b] Let me be your sunshine, your ray of shining hope I want to be the one to set your world aglow. Whenever your heart is full of darkness or the world around you's gray I want to be the one to take that sadness away. Whenever your tears are falling and your emotions are breaking apart I want to be the one to come and mend your heart. When you need someone to talk to and you feel you're never right I want to be the one to redirect your sight. You are so important to me and I care more than you'll know So let me be your sunshine and light your heart aglow.[/center] I have dedicated this poem to the following: [b]Kenneth:[/b] You are my best Otaku friend. I hope you feel better. I am always here for you. [b]Lady M:[/b] For everything you've been through with Mike. Good luck with your pregnancy. [b]Shyguy aka Joshness:[/b] I know you've been going through alot. Just hang in there. [b]Juuthena:[/b] I hope you find that someone just for you. [b]PiroMunkie:[/b] Heh, just because. ^_^ [b]Jenna:[/b] I hope you know your brother is in a better place. I also leave this to everyone who is going through hard times right now and need someone to rely on. I am willing to be your friend if I'm not already. I love all of you guys. *QA*[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conpiracymonki Posted February 24, 2003 Share Posted February 24, 2003 [b][size=1] I love it to bits ^_^ I like the way you made it rhyme without it sounding even slightly cheesy. *cough[/b] Unlike mine [b]cough* And I like the way you made the ending lead back to the beginning again. The only thing I can say is the word 'redirect' seems kinda out of place in the poem to me. *shrugs*[/b] *feels inspired and thinks about maybe making an poem for OB too*[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted February 24, 2003 Share Posted February 24, 2003 [color=crimson]Ooooo! I like this poem! ^_^ And thanks, Tortor. *grins* I am happier now..[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shy Posted February 24, 2003 Share Posted February 24, 2003 [size=1]I really like the poem Tori. It is very good, and it means a lot to me that you partially-dedicated it to me. -Shy[/size] :whoops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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