Writing The Succubi

[Biida]

[color=skyblue] Damn, I haven't posted in this forum in ages...

Eh. It's nice to be back then, in that case. Lol. Anyway, here's a new one. So, uh, enjoy..

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[b][u]The Succubi[/b][/u]

Silently, stealthily, I weave you into my web of death.
I trap you, gradually, your life crumbling and falling.

A warrior, a woman, a strength in my beauty...
You'll never stop me.

I hate, you hate,
We feel the power.
You feel the pleasure.
I feel the death.

The passion erupts,
And it tears you apart.

Laughing, I cry, the power erupting,
From your surprise.
From your hate...
From your hate,
I feel the energy flow.

Your love, your lust, will be your demise.
Forgiveness?
Ptsh. What's that?

You know why you hate,
You hate me.
I know why you hate,
You hate yourself.
And your hate will be your demise.
I will be your demise.
Can you resist me?

And in your madness,
You become but a dog,
Begging and pleading at his master's, his mistress's feet.

And you really think I care?
Care.
Ptsh. What's that?

I kick you aside,
And I laugh and I cry,
And I feel the power all the more grow.

And standing in the shadows,
I rip you to shreds in the sunlight.
In front of the crowd, the public.
But in front of no one,
In your chambers.

I am the seductress,
I am your goddess.
Your lover, your life.

And you really think I care...

Care.
What's that? [/color]

[DeathKnight]

[color=crimson]It sounds like a song.

I'd call it sadistically kawaii ^_~

7.8/10[/color]