Hayate Posted March 22, 2003 Share Posted March 22, 2003 this is a creation of mine I put it up for more critque and any other advice on women thank you. I Thank God He Sent You to Me by Lendell I thank God he sent you to me, For you and I were meant to be. We have a bond too strong to break, I have a love no one can take. In you, I have found a love so true, My heart is filled with love for you. Every time I see you, my heart skips a beat, To be with you would make me whole, to be with you would make me complete My love for you grows more with each passing day, The thought of your gorgeous face takes my breath away: Those beautiful eyes fill my soul with happiness, Those luscious lips I would love to kiss. I dream of that day when we may say, "I do" But until that day I will always love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyLynn Posted March 22, 2003 Share Posted March 22, 2003 [COLOR=deeppink]I really like it...Who are you talking about in your poem..or did you just write it on a random thought..Well still love it. Hugs and Kisses, Me[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Mayiessen Posted March 22, 2003 Share Posted March 22, 2003 [color=skyblue]Awwwww that poem is so cute! So touching! I could never write anything like that...[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Posthumous Posted March 22, 2003 Share Posted March 22, 2003 [color=teal][size=1][b]That is simply great, very emotional *sniff* I wish I could write poems like that...Keep it up! ^^![/b][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Posted March 23, 2003 Author Share Posted March 23, 2003 I wrote it for this girl I know and I like her anyone think she would like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Mayiessen Posted March 23, 2003 Share Posted March 23, 2003 [color=skyblue]I'm guessing you're a guy. I thought you were a girl...probably cause a girl I know has the name you use on here. Yeah I'm sure she would love it!!! Hehe I love it![/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jupitersun Posted April 1, 2003 Share Posted April 1, 2003 if she doesn't like it she's gone mental...that is so sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AnimeGurl Posted April 2, 2003 Share Posted April 2, 2003 awwww...that poem is adorable...it's so nice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Posted April 8, 2003 Author Share Posted April 8, 2003 here's another one titled [b][i]Longer[/i][/b] The longer I live the harder it is to die, The longer I love the harder it is to let go, For life can toss you lemon's, but making lemonade isn't reqired And the longer I sit, the harder it is to get up, The longer I wallow in sorrow and self pity the harder it is to be happy again And the longer the longer I'm sad the harder it is for the night to end this ones pretty sad I know but tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted April 13, 2003 Share Posted April 13, 2003 that is so lovely.... *sniff* u really have a thing 4 it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Posted April 15, 2003 Author Share Posted April 15, 2003 You know you get the best inpiration sitting up late watching anime this one's entitled[b]Peer into the abyss[/b] As i look into the pit called my soul I quickly find myself lost in a labrinthof lost love and gained pain and always walking on a road of sorrow and mistrust The things i've seen the places I've been imprint themselves on the soul within An as I peer into the abyss within me I see my sad lonley dangerous face sraing back at me thats all I had time for but again give me your critiqe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kikyo Posted April 17, 2003 Share Posted April 17, 2003 It was good whenever I write something to someone I put crap like I believe in angels I believe in angels the ones that god sends to earth because I met you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Posted April 28, 2003 Author Share Posted April 28, 2003 Hey that was kool do another one kikyo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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