Guest Oyeah Posted April 2, 2003 Share Posted April 2, 2003 Hey all, I'm quite new at this but I've put a lot of effort in so please take the time to post or at the least take the time to read it. I can't take all the credit Dark Order Knight helped me by giving me some ideas and tips on how to make this story better. Thanks a lot! Oyeah! Sir Karn wearily walked back through his home village of Albadan. Much had changed since he last walked through these streets. He looked , as he walked, at nearby houses, and a smile crossed his war torn face as two school children skipped by. As they did he remembered fondly of his wife Lady Sophia and his young son Sean. Karn had not seen either of them since the war against the Talossans started and had not seen his son Sean since he was just a baby. Karn was called by fellow paladins of Helm to aid in The Battle of Lilacor in which Helmites went to fight a holy war against the Talossans. The Talossans, priests of the thunder god, Talos declared Lilarcor Valley sacred ground and demanded that the villages inside the valley be vacated or else. The threats were ignored and thus The Talossans murdered the villagers and burned their houses to the ground. In retaliation to their lack of humanity the Helmites declared war. The Helmites had emerged victorious, but at what cost. Through the three years of warfare countless numbers of brave men had been lost. Men. Some of which had families of there own that depended on them to return. Anger crossed Karns face but soon faded and turned to a warm smile as he enetered his Estate. Karn enetered but heard no noise. All was quiet. "Sophia! Sweetheart! We won! I'm home!" No answer. "Sean are you here?" He instantly thought Sean was playing a game of hide and seek and began to look for him. "Sean where are you?" Karn called playfully, "Well, if he's not here I'll just go down to the store and buy a new boy!" Karns face fell as no reply met his ears. Panic seized his war-torn heart as he began searching the household. Every room had been turned upside-down in search of his family. As he found himself in front of his bedroom doorm a feeling of forboding doom sunk into his mind. His hand seemed to have lead weights hung from them. Every inch seemed like a mile. Every second a millenia. He opened it and let the door swing wide on it's hinges. Karn turned away quickly, his stomach in his throat and his legs weakening. He dropped to his knees and forced himself to look at the scene again. Horror struck Karn. Trembling with tears flowing down his face he crawled through the blood soaked floor over to the bodies of his son and wife. The blood was cold and the room reaked of death, giving Karn the impression that they had been dead for a long time. He cried and lie there next to them, sobbing for hours before getting up and cursing at the top of his lungs. Many days of morning passed and he made his way to the Temple of Helm. There he was offered countless wishes and condolences. he approached the Head Priest there Sir Ryan and resigned his status as Legion of Helm. "But why?" asked Sir Ryan. "Because if I didn't leave them to fight in some bastard, meaningless war after they pleaded me to stay home with them, then they would still be alive today!" Karn stormed out of the temple throwing as far as he could into the trees his Sword of Helm. Karn returned to the burial place of his wife and son and vowed to have vengeance, to put their souls in the afterlife to rest. Little did he know that this was the beginning of a journey that would emotionally change Karn forever. And there it is. OK now i'm looking fo some people who want to be party members. Enigma is a fellow wizard. I'm looking for some creativity and some imagination in charcters. I'm also looking for someone who wants to be the assasin, the man who hired him and a few other general evil doers. Post any of your ideas guys, create some charcters orgive me tips cause I'm new or whatever. With your help guys we can make this in to a very epic story. What you need is: Name Age Class Race Alignment Proficiencies Weapons of choice Bio Description Thanks guys! Oyeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted April 2, 2003 Share Posted April 2, 2003 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Hmmm. I'll take the assassin. I always have before, anyway. That is if the assassin is working on his own. If he's just some dodgy hired pawn, I'll just be a random evil doer. By the way, I'm assuming this has been run on a DnD style basis? Name: Rali Kreigyr Age: 23 Class: Monk (Order of the Long Death) Race: Human Alignment: Lawful Evil Proficiencies: Just the "Monk" weapon proficiency. Doesn't wear armour after all. Weapons of choice: Either twin kamas or ye olde hand to hand (Gauntlets of the Long Death). Bio: Not really much to it. Grew up on the streets of Luskan, not a great place for any child. Fell in with the High Captains as a soldier, after attempting to pick a captain's (not one of the High Captains, one of the soldier's officers) pockets, was caught, and a chase ensued. The man attacked Rali with a long dagger, Rali responded by knocking it out of his hand. The man stepped back, impressed, and offered Rali a position. Then proceeded to kick the hell out of him every day for a few years... Rali's skills weren't really suited to a sword, axe, or any other such large weapon, just to killing. The relish he showed, and his attachment to the dead, quickly got him shunned, and eventually expelled, from the guards. He travelled for a year or two, and found the Order of the Long Death. He survived the initiation rites, barely. He and one other were the only ones to do so out of a group of twenty. Rali is yet to be indoctrinated into the inner circle, a ritual that requires killing one who is currently a member, with a weapon blessed by the order. He is in the world for the express purpose of searching for that weapon. Description: Six foot, one inch in height, remarkably slender. Skin is deathly white, a mark common to monks of his ilk. Hair is black, and just past chin length, let grow after he was initiated. A large percentage of his torso is traced with scars, reminders of his training. Wears long black pants, boots, and a black half robe. Eyes are grey. Face is done up grey, with blackened eyes and lips.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakura Posted April 2, 2003 Share Posted April 2, 2003 Er....I'll just be a good person or whatever. [color=royalblue]Name:Amber Age:20 Class:Warrior Race:Human Alignment:A female warrior of Rayn Proficiencies:glaive skills,evasion,defense,martial arts. Weapon of Choice: Double ended glaive.(Two blades.One on top and one at the bottom)She just carries it around like a staff. Bio:She was only about 15 when enemies raided her town.Then the enemies came into her house.Her parents heard them coming and hid her away in a cupboard.The door was still open a crack.She loked through it and watched the murder of her parents.After the incident she was raged.She ran into her room,grabbed things she would need and ran to the room where her parents were murdered.Their bodies were lying there soaked in their own blood.Her father had tried to fend them off with his sword and her mother had tried to defend with her glaive.She picked her mother's glaive.She looked at her parents one more time.Then vowed to get revenge on whoever did it to them.She went to the weaponsmith and asked him to weld another blade onto the glaive.He welded on another blade,polished it,cleaned it and sharpened it.She was about to take out some money when he stopped her.He said he was good friends with her parents.She thanked him and then she ran out of town and went into the forest.She spent a few years in the forest.She got to know animals and she soon got a companion.A lone wolf cub.Whose parents were also murdered by hunters.They became friends and they grew a few years together.She named the wolf Mango.Because it seemed to like mangoes.They never left each others sides.The reason they're such good companions is because they both went through the same thing.After the few years in the wild she returned with Mango to Rayn.Everyone was scared of them because Mango was a wolf.She soon discovered that they had made a smallish army against the enemies that killed friends and loved ones.They named it the Warriors of Rayn.She joined with Mango. Description:Medium height.Tanned skin from being in the sun.Chocolate brown hair with emerald eyes.She wears a baby blue jacket open over a white t-shirt,with blue pants,white socks,blue and white shoes and a blue backpack with supplies.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigma Posted April 3, 2003 Share Posted April 3, 2003 [COLOR=blue][I]Sakuramon- Proficiencies pretty much means skills. If someone wants to they can elaborate further. Hmmm, let's see now....I'll just be the person I said earlier. NAME: Dren Bre'y'nor AGE: 24 CLASS: Mage ALIGNMENT: Chaotic good PROFICIENCIES: Basically a variety of spells. Dren doesn't study any specific schools of magic, although he is more dominant in some than others, he prefers to be an all-rounder mage. WEAPONS: Durac's Staff of eternity (a basic fighting staff that is indestructable to most physical and some magical damage), small dagger and light crossbow (should his magic fail him). BIO: Dren did not have a hard life that many people around him had. He spent most of his life in a safe home with his family and with the friends he had. Not particularly excited of the prospect of becoming a modest farmer, Dren dreamed about the arts of magic and being on an adventure, as was the fantasy of many children. His life changed when a strange man came passing through the town. The man was a sorceror of some reknown, and as Dren followed the man, he felt compelled to follow the secretive man, and as he left his home and life behind, he began his life as he had never forseen it. DESCRIPTION: Slightly higher than average in height, and an average build potrays him to appear just like a commoner, but his distinct red robe and cloak edged with gold and blue clearly shows otherwise. As well as his robe, he wears a simple blue shirt and long pants. He has very dark blonde hair and crystal like blue eyes.[/COLOR][/I] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerosaber Posted April 3, 2003 Share Posted April 3, 2003 Name: Tryant Ebon Age: 27 Class: Fighter Alignment: Good neutral Proficiencies: The basic fighter package plus specialized weapon feats in the Greatsword Weapons: Magical greatsword named Razor's Edge Bio:Tryant grew up knowing war. He enlisted in the Leigon of Helm when he was 13 and has grown up with the people in the Leigon including Karn. His status as a soldier is that he is a captain of a small platoon and commands the right wing of the army during large scale battles. Description: He is about 6'2 with dark green eyes. He wears a suit of armor but no helm and a white cloak attached to his armor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oyeah Posted April 3, 2003 Share Posted April 3, 2003 OK so far we've got a party of four. think about two more comerades should do it. We also need a few more evil aligned people. Also with the evil doers I was thinking about telling the two stories of good and evil perspective and having the two stories entwine with each other. Tell me what you think! I better do Karn's profile Name: Karn Cordel Age: 23 Class: Fallen Paladin Alignment: Choatic neutral Race: Human Proficiencies: Sword and shield style. Proficient with close range, hand-to-hand combat. Can not use ranged weapons with much skill. Weapons: Well, I wrote that Karn threw away his Sword of Helm, so he'll have to get a new weapon sooner or later... Repel Shield: Deflects ranged weapons and minor spells being cast at Karn. Bio: Karn grew up with an abusive father. His father would come back from the tavern intoxicated and let his anger out on Karn. Karn's mother died when she was giving birth to him. His dad loved his mum and thus blamed Karn for he death. Karn ran away from home and lived on the streets until High Priest Ryan Trawl introduced him to Helm's grace. At the young age of 15 Karn became an initiate of Helm and became a squire to the famed woman knight Prio Ordana. Karn rose in status and soon met Lady Sophia who he later wed. Sophia was all Karn had left in the world and when he found her and his son Sean dead. This destroyed whatever bit of faith that was left in him. He is now gathering a party to seek out the killer. Description: 5'11'' 240 Ibs, tanned skin, red-brown hair and green eyes. Many battle scars, war torn. Strong build. Half-beard (whiskers sort of) an indication Karn hasn't shaved in a while. Full body plate mail armor with various cracks and scratches showing it has been well used. As soon as we get more people wanting to join I'll start the story. Cheers guys! Oyeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted April 4, 2003 Share Posted April 4, 2003 [font=gothic][color=crimson]I have no problem with writing my own evil oriented storyline. It might even make sense here and there...[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oyeah Posted April 6, 2003 Share Posted April 6, 2003 Ok I'm looking for two more party members, I'd like a bit of variety in them as well two guys (everyone always wants to be a warrior!) I'm also after some evil aligned people two join with Harlequin. Also if anybody has any other ideas for any other characters in my RPG don't hesitate to let me know. So far I've got 5 recruits I could REALLY use more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Posted April 7, 2003 Share Posted April 7, 2003 Name: Le'vana Fedor Age: 21 Class: Psion Race: Human Alignment: Chaotic neutral Proficiencies: Besides the basic psionic characteristics, such as telekinesis and forseeing, she creates potions to help/harm people Weapons of choice: her potions and her three sais, given to her by her mother Bio: Born to a family of alchemists, 'Vana grew up to follow the family trade. When she was 5, however, her mother discovered the signs of telekinesis (i.e. exploding vials). She began to teach her how to control her powers. After 10 years of training, her mother died, of reasons unknown, leaving her with her father. However, he was killed, trying to protect her from invaders of the village while she ran away. She came back, days later, to bury her father. Collecting the items she needed, she vowed to find the killer... Description: [URL=http://the.animearchive.org/showimg/marie/3/mna23.jpg]Le'vana's pic[/URL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oyeah Posted April 8, 2003 Share Posted April 8, 2003 Just one more party member and we can get this RPG started! Umm...by the way, I'm just curious, what's a psion. Can any one elborate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakura Posted April 8, 2003 Share Posted April 8, 2003 I'm not sure but it could be something to do with Psychic powers. But I'm not sure.You should probably ask Panny_Chan. But that's a guess anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted April 8, 2003 Share Posted April 8, 2003 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Yeah, its basically pychic powers, direct mental manipulation, as opposed to magic. That basically the only important difference, application differs only a little, and then only in certain schools.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 I'm sorry for the horrible sign-up... I spent about 20 min on my first draft and then IE decided to suddenly quit and erase it all. [center]~~~[/center] [b]Name:[/b] Alain LeFlore [b]Age:[/b] Lost In The Winds Of Time [b]Class:[/b] Fallen Angel [b]Race:[/b] Angel [b]Alignment:[/b] Nuetral/Evil [b]Proficiencies:[/b] Proficient in many types of low and high level magic and is highly experinced in dagger. [b]Weapons Of Choice:[/b] Five Holy Daggers, strapped to different part of his body. [b]Bio:[/b] Alain had once been a servant to the God of Life. He would deal with plaetary matters but always remain true to his Lord. Unfortunately, he could never be void of such things that were his nature before he ascended. He lusted after an earthly woman and bed her. The God of Life banished him from his heavenly kingdom. Alain has staked the earth ever since. [b]Description:[/b] Wears mostly black clothing. Underneath the black cloak and undershirt, he wears a mail made of Blessed Steel. Very strong and magical. His face is scar-ridden and bleak. A small stubble covers his chin and piercing blue eyes perfectly contrast his stoic nature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakura Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 Is this going to start soon?? I can't wait.I'm sure this will be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oyeah Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 OK I'll start the RPG as soon as I can probably tomorrow or the day after that (the weekend) I've noticed a couple of other people have in their bio that their parents were killed also. What if the murderer of them was the same assasin who killed Karn's? Of course The Harlequin would need to come up with a reason that he killed them. Tell me what you think! Oyeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakura Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 Well....That's kind of what I was thinking. The assasin just went around terrorizing people and going around a killing spree. Anyways I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Now why would I do that? I'll get myself a reason for multiple killings, worry not. It may, no will, be a little convulted though...[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oyeah Posted April 12, 2003 Share Posted April 12, 2003 OK It's all set have a look in the Adventure Forum! Oyeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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