Geist Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 [COLOR=blue]I've only made a couple of banners, so I'm sort of new at this. This is the busiest one I've ever made. Tell me what you think about it. (And don't forget to be harsh, I can't learn if I don't know what I'm doing wrong.) Thank you.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gotenssj_2002 Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 Ok ..this banner is pretty good..,but i think it could be better.....i dont know how but i think it could be better.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Posthumous Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 [color=teal][size=1][b]Me likes!The color of the backround is the bomb.The text fits in very very nicely. 9/10[/b][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaiyanPrincessX Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 Its alright. I don't like how the picture is positioned or how its just a rectangle within the banner. Its too obvious and stands out. Maybe blend it in more or something. I like the qoute though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GinnyLyn Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 Maybe the image and the chunk of text next to it are throwing the balance off. The pic itself looked odd to me at first--it took me a moment to figure out that he had a face. oO; Quite frankly, I really like the text at the bottom. It fits the banner. The grid and color are also good choices, as well as the repetition of the word "dead" on the right. The balance still seems skewed somehow. Unless you wanted to make it seem like a symoblic hospital bed, with the "dead" text being his chart at the foot of it. Does that make sense? :bluesweat If that isn't what you meant to do, I recommend centering the image, and having the repeated "dead"s spilling out on either end of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chris Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 [color=green]hey, you said harsh. the pic blends too abruptly with the backround. the picture isn't of the best quality, but sometimes that can't be avoided. as said before, the whole thing is a little of balance. and, in my opinion, the text isn't all that great. now i'm not saying it's bad, it's actually pretty good. i was just being very picky. you are much better at this than me, so don't take my advice too seriously. just trying to help.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 [size=1]I like it, even some of the stuff others seem to think could be improved upon. My only complaint, balance or otherwise, is the paleness of the image vs the bright red background. Although it's rather looking through a hospital window, they always have screwy lighting.... So, nice. [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest visser 3 Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 Thats a good banner.I think you could make the letters a little more focused.Otherwise its great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geist Posted April 10, 2003 Author Share Posted April 10, 2003 [COLOR=blue]Thank you everyone for your comments! :D Here's my second try at this banner. Does anybody have a hint to how I could get it to blend in a little more? (So that it's not so square.) Thanks again everyone![/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Posthumous Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by chaos_79 [/i] [B]I think you could make the letters a little more focused.[/B][/QUOTE] [color=teal][size=1][b]But that would make the banner look a bit too plain.The effect on the text adds more spiff.[/b][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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