Vicky Posted April 27, 2003 Share Posted April 27, 2003 There a war going on right now, So this might help. If the soilders think like this...the whole war would be over by now! This is a pretty good poem (; Let us all join hands together, All around the world. In ever tribe and ever nation, Let this banner be unfrold. Peace on earth good will to all men, Is the message that we bring. And as in unitey we lift our voices as one. At this season we remeber, The gift of gods own son. A small baby in a manger, Has brought hope to every one! So lift up your hearts togher, And let the world sing as one! Peace on earth! Peace on earth to everone! peace on earth, And good will to all men! Peace on earth to every one!!! Peace on earth to ever one!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted April 27, 2003 Share Posted April 27, 2003 Very nice =) A little GospelSong kinda poem. Really nice. Dude. If you begin such a war, you should step out of the army, so theres no war to start. Let Bush and the Pentagon, fight Saddam and his "buddy's" fist on fist >=) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted April 27, 2003 Author Share Posted April 27, 2003 Yeh, your right! What the hell is the war about any ways??? And thanks for looking at this poem. I will read all of yours, because there so good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted April 27, 2003 Share Posted April 27, 2003 [size=1]While I won't comment on the logic behind it, this is probably the best work of yours I've seen.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted April 29, 2003 Author Share Posted April 29, 2003 Here's another poem of peace, this is about different countrys. There like songs... We come from india... We come from the land of india From the himmala moutains to the bay of manqam. We come to sing a song of praise To the king of heaven who was born on chrismas day! Jueman jeuman juel! Our god has come with us to dwell! Jueman jueman juel! Our god has come with us to dwell! Next, Africa We come from Africa We come to give you glory And we come to give you glory And we come to worship The new born king! Glory glory Halljui! Glory glory Halljui! Glory glory... Halljui! Now, china... We have come from china Were the rice and bamboo grow. We have come to dance and sing! All around the world we come to celeabrate this day! The brith of a very speical king! Glory in the highest tha angels sings Bring peace on earth And to all gods crations We have come from china were the rice and bamboo grow To celebrate a very speical king! Spain, up ya come! We come from sunny spain Were the rain Falls mainly on the plane! We come to sing To the king born upon this day! Olla! Dulla! Olla! Dulla! OLLA! Thay were short, but there good. Don't worry about the weird words like dulla and jueman. There words from that country. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonstar Posted May 4, 2003 Share Posted May 4, 2003 :D The first one was pretty cool, sara, um... don't take this the wrong way, but... uh... :eek: try to be a little less negative... the important thing is that vicky is trying, other than "The howler" her writing actually makes sense. I know I enjoy reading it. *shrugs* I don't like when people pick my work apart pointing out mistakes, 'cos basically, we all make them, and I do proof read what I write. meh. I'm done. *hides under table* Don't hurt me! :worried: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted May 4, 2003 Author Share Posted May 4, 2003 Thanks dragon star! Your just like me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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