Night_Shade Posted May 2, 2003 Share Posted May 2, 2003 As I stand here by these gates Looking in instead of looking out Tears of blood run down my face And I hold back the scream of anguish Lightning assaults the ground around Rain hammers down upon my back As I stand here with my arms spread And my face tilted downward towards Hell I stare longingly into the night As I stand here by these gates Looking in instead of looking out Tears of blood run down my face ~Night Shade~ what do you all think of this poem? honestly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarK DeatH Posted May 2, 2003 Share Posted May 2, 2003 wow! I really liked it ^^ Very truly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spike speigel Posted May 2, 2003 Share Posted May 2, 2003 Good poem. Very good indeed. Keep up the great work and I hope you decide to post more poems in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiV Posted May 2, 2003 Share Posted May 2, 2003 [COLOR=red]Tears of blood run down my face[/COLOR] I like this sentence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted May 4, 2003 Share Posted May 4, 2003 I like that. It was very good. Nice words and all. Kinda reminds me to clean out the fish tank.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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