wiccansamurai Posted May 6, 2003 Share Posted May 6, 2003 The words that never touched her at least not to their eyes. The love she never felt Lost in a world full of lies. Trapped in shades of gray and white She cries alone Far from unfeeling light. The world swallows her color, Her soul is envoloped in hate. her eyes are clouded in pain, She gives in to her final fate. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted May 10, 2003 Share Posted May 10, 2003 Thats nice. It sound like a poem that I wrote. Hope you do another, because I would love to read it! Have you seen mine? I did; The dragon king, The howler, full moon fever, death of my best friend and a peom of peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccansamurai Posted May 10, 2003 Author Share Posted May 10, 2003 ill be sure too read ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted May 12, 2003 Share Posted May 12, 2003 Verry nice, and verry deep. Ide not change it a bit, this is one of your better ones. 10/10 :) Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccansamurai Posted May 13, 2003 Author Share Posted May 13, 2003 thankies! (i like that first 10 Oo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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