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Warning to those whom wish to post characters this game will be a slower paced game with a maximum of one post per day for each person involved for I the host don't have to worry about falling behind! Also I'll pick from the seven characters I think will add something to this story, with that it mind please continue.

[I]The victors write history, as the saying goes. Whether an uprising is seen as a glorious rebellion or a treacherous insurrection depends entirely on who held the upper hand at the end, with the losers consigned to posterity as traitors, tyrants or worse. Their story is largely forgotten.[/I]

[I]We are told that demons are the incarnations of evil, spirits who exist to seduce the innocent and lure the virtuous to destruction. They are driven by a relentless hate of all things holy, consumed by a malevolent hatred of light and life. They are the purveyors of lies and misdirection, clouding the minds of mortals with promises of power and glory. At least, that's what the good book says. That's why they were hurled into the darkness of the Pit, bound in chains of fire until the end of days. Only God knows what would happen if these evil spirits were ever freed.[/I]

Now mankind is about to hear the other side of the story.

-- Mortal's Need (have to have 3-5 mortals)
Name: (Duh!)
Age: (Duh!)
Appearance: (description of character)
Bio/History: (Duh!) this is required.

Fallen Angel's Need (only allowed up to 3 others) (Your character doesn't recall the Fall from grace or the fact she/he is an angel when the game starts that will be covered in the progress of the story.)

-- Mortal's
Name: (Duh!)
Age: (Duh!)
Appearance: (description of character)
Bio/History: (Duh!) this is required.

--Celestial's
Name: (Duh!)
Age: (Duh!)
Appearance: (description of character)
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-- Mortal's Need
Name: Daved Blayne

Age: 27

Appearance: Daved is tall and thin and not overly attractive. He has short brown hair that is already thinning in the back, he hides it with one of his many baseball caps. He has big brown eyes, one of his better aspects though they are covered by glasses which give them a larger than life(almost anime) appearance to them. He is usually seen wearing a pair of khaki's and a button collared pull over or faded blue jeans and a plain grey T-Shirt. He has two scars down the middle of his wrists very slight though almost nonapparent from a time when he was sixteen he attempted to commit suicide...

Bio/History: Daved grew up in a simple home, though it were only him and his parents they had never taught him about christianity, religion, or god or angels. His mother was a stressed and mentally ill woman and his father was an abusive alcoholic. when he was ten his father had come home drunk and finally taken the revolver he held in his dresser and ended the misery of his wife and turned the gun on himself while Daved hid in his room asking anyone to help him, to save him quietly... But noone listened. He went through foster homes like a fish breathe's water but never stayed anywhere long, he was too opinionated and started showing violent urges much akin to his fathers. Finally he was adopted at age 15 and he was put on meds and made to see a psychologist. They had discovered that most of his violent tendancies where the result of nearly witnessing his fathers homocide/suicide and the many years of abuse with him. After many years of therapy they had helped him learn to supress his violence and let it ease out in more productive ways than physical and verbal outlashes. he finished high school with a decent grade average and got a scholarship to a university where he majored in journalism and minored in literature and writing. A short time after his graduation from college he hit a rock bottom in his life and attempted suicide though as he felt lifes grip slipping from him he could have sworn he had a vision. An angel appearing from heaven saving his life and healing his wounds to scars. From that moment on he had dedicated his life to the study and attempted proof that supernatural creatures such as angels really did and still do exist. Therefore he went from becoming an author to a sort of paranormal investigator and scientist.
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[B]Fallen Angel[/B]

[I]Name[/I] Cy Strain

[I]Appearance[/I] See attachment

[I]Bio/History[/I] Cy grew up with his parents in a small house just outside of a huge city. He spent much of his time out doors traveling to and from the city. He gained friends and allys through gangs in the city. Despite his rough up-bringing he had certain "pure" values to him. Honor and honesty were major aspects in his up-bringing.

His parents were rather poor, and his father jumped from job to job. His mom was his inspiration through many time. He had no respect for his dad who would come home drunk and would throw Cy around every once in a while. Cy used this as an excuse to get stronger. In his spare time he constanly trained himself to get stronger and smarter.

His desire to help his mother got him in trouble several times. He did what he was good at, and often stole money from people to help support his mother. When he was 16 he was sent to JV for attempting to rob a house.

He was involved in many gang fights and continued to train. He got stronger to hide all his insecurites and what he thought to be weakness. Despite all his gang fights he never killed anyone.

He graduated college with a 3.8 grade average and traveled around looking for what he was ment to do. He always thought he had a purpose, he knew he did, but he wasn't sure what it was.


[I]Personality[/I] He is quiet to most and can be thought of as mean, harsh and rude. He trys to put off a tough first impression. He is loyal to his friends, but is constantly moving. He always feels like something is pulling him places.
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Fallen Angel

Name: Juile

Appearance: Jet-black hair that falls past her shoulders. Dark Dark Dark blue eyes. About 5"6. White ribbion in hair. Blue shirt. Black pants. No shoes. Two blakc dots under right eye. Face is very pale. Almost ghost like.



Bio/History: Juile grew up alone most of her life. She became very isolated. She had no friends. Everyone thought she was a freak. Her eyes were achually green. But over time they became the darkest shade of blue. Juile was born to a very cruel world. But even through the worst of times she found a way to survive....








Personality: Juile is a very shy girl. She hardly talks anymore.
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Fallen angel

Name:John Grey
Appearence: Raven black hair that is quite unruly. He has piercing green eyes and seem sto lok into the depths of your soul. He wears grey slacks, white shirt, a grey sprts jacket, a white shirt, black tie, and lack oxfords. (5'11")

Bio: He was born to a rather affluent family, who fell from grace after his father was implicated in a scandal. At age 10, his father killed hmself and left John to be rised by his mother, who shuttled him around to fdifferent boarding schools. He entered collge at age 18 and completed Law school at 25. He currently works for a law firm in massachusetts.


Personality: quiet and reserved, he often has outbursts of temper
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[b][size=1]----------Fallen Angel's Need[/size][/b]


[b]Name:[/b] Ryan Schezar [i](I think I may need a new name...)[/i]

[b]Age:[/b] Unknown (Appears to be 27)

[b]Appearance:[/b] See attachment.

[b]History:[/b] Childhood? Family? Friends? What is that? Ryan never had a family. No friends. He has absolutely no memory of his childhood. Ryan started life as a man in his mid twenties. How he grew up, where, and when is a mystery to him. Ryan does know one thing, he doesn't age. When his memory began, the year was 1867. It is now 2003. He is at least 150 years old, if not more.

He slept on the streets of England for almost a year before he fell ill and was committed to a local hospital. His body cured itself seeming to fight the infection overnight. After he was released, he began working at a local steel mill. After his tenth year people begna realizing he wasn't aging. He wasn't gaining muscle. His hair wasn't even growing. People began harrassing him. He slayed everyone in the mill with an iron sword he had bought.

He left England.

In America, his luck didn't change a bit. He could not stay in one place for more than a few years, for people began to grow suspicious. He would kill those that confronted him and burn their bodies. The river was the best hiding place for the bones.

After almost sixty years, he left America.

Now? Ryan resides in a desolate piece of wilderness in Canada. Far away from anyone, he simply lives there. No one to trouble him. No one to tease him. No one to kill... Only a spot to hone his skills with the sword, and to meditate on his violent urges.

Something stirs...

Recently, meditaion has been difficult. Flashes of red... Screams invade his mind... Images of chains streached to their limit, and failing to hold their prisoners... His mind calls to these beasts. The dark shadows in front of searing flames... They whisper...

[FONT=century gothic]"Lead us... Lead us. [b]LEAD US![/b]"[/FONT]
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--Celestial(If allowed)
Name:Sasuka(Suka)
Age:16
Appearance:Chocolate brown hair,emerald eyes,a baby blue jacket open with a white t-shirt inside,blue pants and blue and white joggers.

If not allowed Mortal
Name:Sasuka(Suka)
Age:16
Appearance:Chocolate brown hair,emerald eyes,a baby blue jacket open with a white t-shirt inside,blue pants and blue and white joggers.
Bio/History:Suka was young she grew up in a nice environment.Her family was rich and she had lots of friends.When she was young she grew up in a christian life.She was told of God,angels,heaven and hell.She grew up fearing God and loved angels.She hoped to meet one one day but deep inside she knew she would never meet one.

She was happy in life.She everything she wanted and needed.Until suddenly one day she was out with her friends and there was a fire at her house.When she was dropped off by her friend's parents she stared in shock and horror at her house as flames engulfed it.Suka ran out of the car and knealed outside the house crying.She cried her heart out onto the steps.'WHY GOD?!WHY DID YOU DO THIS!!!!'she thought inside her head angrily.She cried her sorrows out and people around the neighbourhood came and cried too.Although they were rich they were kind and helped around giving money to charities and doing what was right.Suka wondered why God chose them and not her too.After a few days Suka got the strength and walked into the burnt house.Everything was charred.She walked around the house seeing nothing but black and a bit of colours here and there.She went back out and went into the shopping area and bought some food and supplies.I ran away from town and the bad memories.Hoping never to see them again...
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[font=gothic][color=crimson]Mortal
Name: Khalith
Age: 21
Appearance: Check the picture.
Bio/History: Well, he hasn't really done that much with his life, mainly because the last five years of his life haven't really been his. Khalith, you see, is some what more intune with the ...esoteric side of the arcane than most mortals anyway. Basically, he's been "investigating" things like fallen angels for a while now, and he ran into certain problems. Mainly the Church. He's had a few altercations, and interestingly enough, the Church actually knew what to do about it.

He broke out of the cell they threw him in quite recently. He's not quite sure how he pulled it off, it's a bit of a blur, probably all that boring praying...[/font][/color]
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[color=darkgreen][font=gothic]
Fallen Angel

Name: Alastuin West

Age: Very Old (appears seventeen)

Appearance: Long, straight red hair, flawless features, all the hip clothes and piercings, tattoo of a butterfly on inner left thigh. Attending year twelve at a posh girls college and wears her skirt really short. Also known as St Angelica's Most Popular Girl of All Time. Mobile phone, large hoop earrings, loads of guys hanging off every arm. A complete and utter *****.

Bio/His: No one knows anything of parents, relatives, current address or past. The school is a cover for her three thousand years of being a fallen angel, and fighting the holy wars against heaven itself. Despises humanity and all men. [/font][/color]
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Okay so far everything seems to be going rather well, people seem interested.

But there are a few things I'd like to go over ?.
[B]The Harlequin[/B]
[I]You character idea is a great and interesting one indeed, but sadly I feel it would go against my story more then anything. I'm not saying you can't make another character in the place of this one! I'm sure a role-player of capabilities can easily adjust.[/I]

[B]Ravenstorture[/B]
[I]Character seems fine except one little problem (well big one) you missed this?[/I]

Fallen Angel's Need (only allowed up to 3 others) ([B]Your character doesn't recall the Fall from grace or the fact she/he is an angel when the game starts that will be covered in the progress of the story.[/B])

Other then these little things everyone is doing quite well, I'd just like to say?

[B]KnightOfTheRose[/B] [I], character Ryan Schezar very well made I personally think. A little to far pass the border of realization he is apart of the supernatural, but in the way he has presented it I will allow this. ( Congratulations your character is accepted as one of the fallen).[/I]

[B]Heartless Me[/B] [I], character Daved Blayne seems to fit very well into the role I had planed for one of the mortals so ? ( Congratulations your character is accepted as one of the mortals). One little detail I'd like it if he became a paranormal investigator recently.)[/I]

I'm still looking over notes and deciding whom will be invited to the story so please all of you bare with me for a few more days, others may still post characters.
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I must say I'm looking forward to it. I haven't participated in an RPG with you, Carren, since 'Aeons... The Hidden World'.

[edit]And the well written character, as you put it, is the result of not writing anything for about two and a half weeks.
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OOC: Am i too late

Mortal's Need
Name: Ayami(Yami)

Age: 16

Appearance: shoulder length wavy brown hair, hazel brown eyes, 5', black pants, red spaghetti strap tank top, waist long black jacket, black skechers, white-gold necklace, silver bracelet, black french hat(for girls)

Bio/History: Yami lived a healthy, full life. Her family was wealthy, but not extreme. They owned a house in the country, but they lived in the city, or they used to together. Yami's mom died of pneumonia. She worked with animals everywhere and so she must have caught pneumonia from a nearby villager. Yami's father died because of depression. He did not eat, drink, or do anything. Yami's mother was her father's partner in zoology/veteranary. Her mother died when she was 6 years old and her father died when she was 8. She learned that no one could take care of her, except the workers in the house. At the age of 11, she seemed to become less and less happy. She seperated herself from the world, but she helped those in need. Her mtoher and father were both Christians, therefore making Yami Christian. Her church welcomed her anytime she wanted to be there. She's read the bible front to back three times. The only Book that she read was Revelations. It helped her realize that the end will be near and things like that. Her mother told her that God watches everyone and everything. Whatever happens is not because of God, but because of what people's hearts tell them to do. She also said that Yami had a guardian angel watching her. Keeping her far from harm and trouble. Nobody went to Hell, but they would go to Heaven, because everyone deserves a chance.

One day, Yami was in the middle of a burglary in a Grocery. The cops couldn't do anything. One fell and his gun slid towards her. She grabbed it, stood up, and yelled,"HEY!" The burlgar turned to shoot her, but she hit his hand and he fell. The cops ran towards him. That one cop on the floor got up and walked towards her. She told her that she was grateful of what happened and amazed at her gun-handling. Yami never held a gun or even shot one. The police-woman was surprised. She asked Yami if she had a job or a home. She told the woman neither. So, the woman took her in and gave her the job as an junior police. Yami was grateful, but she still kept to herself and no one else. She looked and acted like a gangsta, but wasn't.

or

--Celestial's
Name: Starr
Age: 14
Appearance: shoulder length cherry brown with stars in them, silvery white wings, crystal around neck, long white prom-like dress, silver anklet, silver bracelet on left wrist, celestial henna tattoo on left upper arm
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Please continue to post characters as you wish ?. I am selecting people as they post!

[B]Ohkami[/B] [I], I have decided to accept for character in this story but feel your character fits being a mortal with her background and all, Plus it strikes interest more as a mortal.(Congratulations your character has been accepted as a mortal in this story.)[/I]
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[B]Lalaith Ril[/B] [I], your character background is simple but very well made and with some consideration I've made a my choice (Congratulations your character has been accepted as a Fallen for this story.)[/I]

BTW Everyone who has been accepted please look for more people that maybe interested in this RPG, also anyone that posted a character may repost a new one or put more detail into the character you've already posted.
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[B] Edited [/B]
[B] KiaraStarr [/B] [I], your character is well written and now I've gained in interest and believe she may bring something to the story in a positive manner so with that said ? (Congratulations your character has been accepted as a mortal for this story.)[/I]."


(Please don't take it wrong; it just honestly doesn't strike interest more then anything.)

[B]for Everyone[/B]

The story thread go be started up some time [COLOR=crimson]sunday thur tuesday.[/COLOR]
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[b]A List For Convienence[/b]

[i]Mortals[/i]

Heartless Me: Character Daved Blayne
KiaraStarr: Character Ayami
Ohkami: Character Sasuka


[i]Fallen[/i]

Lalaith Ril: Character Cy Strain
KnightOfTheRose: Character Ryan Schezar
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(I was asked to Join by one of your "mortals" :))

[B] Fallen Angel[/B]

[B]Name:[/B] Namida A'mano
[B]Age:[/B] 23
[B]Height:[/B] 5'6
[B]Hair:[/B] Long, waist legnth, straight and light brown
[B]Eyes:[/B] Deep Green
[B]Appearence:[/B] Tall and verry slim, but not white favorably nice uh.."equipment" Namida is extremly ttrictive. Usually wearing flared hip huger blue jeans and a sleeve/strapless white tank top. Adorned by a see thru elbow legnth black slip over, buttoning in the front.
[B]Personality:[/B] Normally Having a "Get outta my way" outlook her Strong willed I can take care of my self appearence is only an alure hiding her rather childlike and lonly nature. Acting tough but really being weak helps her make her way.
[B]Bio:[/B] Namida's looks constantly caused her trouble and having many boyfriends who took advantage of her sex and looks. Attempting to think that ecause she was a girl and acted tough she was in need of "saving" Every guy she dated found them selves bloodied and brushed after trying to push them selves on her. She often has been in trouble with the law and a major superority compley. Making her wya now as a ighly skilled thief and knife'ma shes also not to shabby with a sword.


Hope that suits you. :) I'd love to be in.
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[b]A List ([i]revised[/i])[/b]

[i]Mortals[/i]

Heartless Me: Character Daved Blayne
KiaraStarr: Character Ayami
Ohkami: Character Sasuka


[i]Fallen[/i]

Lalaith Ril: Character Cy Strain
KnightOfTheRose: Character Ryan Schezar
Shinkoru: Character Namida A'mano

And then there's Carren who has yet to post any sort of a character. ;)
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