Sky Moonflow Posted May 19, 2003 Share Posted May 19, 2003 :( I really have been haveing bad days. So give me your true opinon on this. DollHouse I sit on the attic floor Looking at nothing Just thinking of the past Waiting for my chance to fall I look out the windows But see nothing at all I close my eyes But I know it is still there I look towards the trap door I walk over to it and pull the door open Looking down into the mass darkness Shivering as the cold air surrounds me I return to my sitting place I look inside the Doll House window And see a girl I scream and stumble backwards I fall into the hole Tht trap door snaping shut infront of me I fall to the ground Never to look at that DollHouse ever again......... :shifty: I know this won't get me any good comments but oh well.:shifty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epitome Posted May 19, 2003 Share Posted May 19, 2003 You know, I like it kind of. Its really wierd why but I just do. I like the explanations and such. Its a good piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyLynn Posted May 20, 2003 Share Posted May 20, 2003 [COLOR=deeppink]Its very..Nice. I think you have done better though. But its very nice. ^^[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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