Writing ten ways to see myself

[future girl]

so this a poem i wrote for an assignment and many ppl told me it was really good, i'm not so sure so i thought i'd ask you guys since you really don't care whether you hurt my feelings or not. tell me what you think about it please. . .

1
Through a telescope
From far away
Never too close to touch
Foreign, a promised land

2
In the palm of your hand
Small frail being
Who needs you more
Than you need her

3
From below
Ever present in the skies
Alpha and Omega
Omnipotent GOD of all

4
In the earth
Blue and cold
Beyond you and all the rest
At peace

5
At home
Among her family
Among those who love her
But still outcast her

6
From behind
Au revoir mon ami
Never to see her again
Price of a betrayal

7
Through your eyes
Epitome of fragility
Creature of sorrow
The one you love

8
In the dark
In her ambience
All giggles and inaudible whispers
The fact that?s she?s a child exposed

9
In your dreams
Black and white vision
Of the little nymphette
You always dreamt you?d have

10
In the mirror
Imperfect
But better than all of them
The definition of bi-polar disorder

[Sara]

[size=1]I like this. It's very neat--the different ways, and everything. I really like it.

The last one doesn't fit with all the others, though. Maybe find another way to word it.[/size]