Art I'm stumped...can anyone help?

[Geist]

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I'm trying to make a Boogiepop Phantom banner and it's not going very well. I'm not sure what to do with the background, (color, etc.) Is it taking too much of the attention away from the rest of the pics? I know the text needs to be changed, I'm just trying to find the right colors. Also, any other opinions you may have on it are needed and appreciated. Thank you very much. :D
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[Epitome]

I like it.Its nice but you are right about the background. But I think you should make the words a little darker. I like the colors though.

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To be honest with yu that is actually pretty good. I rank it a 9/10.

[Sere Tuscumbia]

Hmm. The only thing I have a problem with is your incorrect use of the ellipsis. It needs to be "(space).(space).(space).(space)", instead of "..." Yeah, I'm picky 'bout that. ^^;;

The text takes up too much space, in my opinion. A second picture may or may not work, depending on what the picture is and where it's placed.

The rest is just peachy to me! ^_____^

--Sere

[Geist]

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Okay, then. I'll fix up the text a little bit. Also, does it need anything else in your opinion? Like a border, or should I put the girl on both sides of the picture? What do you think? Thanks again. :D
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[Syn]

The text is all horrible and stuff, and theres too much of it, you need it to be more simplistic. (font I mean)