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okay, I finally managed to get an image scanned...
hehe... Well I suppose it was about time... :).
I've worked quite some time on this one... And to be honest (I know it's not smart to like your own work, but yeah, sry... :p ) I like it quite much.

Actually, it's a drawing of my girlfriend (altough she look quite different from the pic). Anyway, I made it on one afternoon or so :s I know, that's a little long, but hey... It's for my girlfriend, right :D

Anyway, as you see, no stylized pic this time, just an ordinary manga girl pic...

And btw, this time I really want comments on my drawings! Because, there are only a few people on this board, who actually comment, and help (thx guys, I won't call the names, but you know who you are :) )
So, let's have some commenting time ;)

oh yeah, uhm... the pic is bigger then your screen is, I know... But please, don't let IE or netscape make it smaller, because the lines become really cr*p then, so... just keep it's original size :D

daedalus
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The body looks amazing, and the hair too, but i find the face (though i understand why it looks that way) a bit cut off, it is supposed to be that way, but it looks a bit too cut off...
anyway the pic is really good! i gave it quiet good actually (cause there isnt something between that and great)
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it kinda looks like you've painted it with watercolours... you didn't colour it on the computer... did you? i like the fact that the lines aren't sharp, i think it gives it a slightly softer feel...

anyways, I'm liking this a lot ^_^ I'm going with "quite good" ^____^
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[size=1]I can't quite figure out what's going on with the hair. What's that black?

I wouldn't change quite so sharply from the darker to the paler blue, either. I don't know if you were going for the shadow of her arm, but it looks like her body comes to a point on the side.

Nice job on the skirt. I love the chair, heh. I would add some shadow on her leg, though...it looks like it's as far up as the chair legs.

*offers you a purple smiley sticker*[/size]
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I think it looks Quite good, your color choices were very nice and i like her stance. I think the only thing that you may want to fix would be her eye, for some reasons it just seems odd, and i agree with what Kaisuke said about the little bit of blurries.
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well...
I think I just read some examples that my explanations on the pic aren't read ;)
no, just kidding... But I have to say to both Kaisuke and KKC (about the blurry lines) that I clearly mentioned that in the post... The image doesn't fit in your screen... If you zoom in to it (in IE just hold your mouse over it for a few secs, and click the button in the lower left corner), the lines are supposed to be way less blurry... And I did mean to make them look like that :) As for the hair, I did make a mistake with that (black stroke, sry sara :D )
anyway, I've read your comments, and I did make some awful mistakes... :p

and braidless baka, I did color it on the computer, only the lineart was drwan with pencil, but I didn't use watercolors (altough I might have tried that)

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I don't like her face and hair the way you drew, and her foot is a bit odd, but the body in general aspects looks fine... I won't vote because there is no rank below the "quite good" that is still "good", alright? So yeah, it's OK to me...
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