Writing My first story...

[Sky Moonflow]

Ok this is my first story so don't give me too many bad comments.

[COLOR=royalblue]royalblue[/COLOR] [B]bold[/B] Lonely Dreams


[COLOR=skyblue]skyblue[/COLOR] Time and time again. Thats what everyone says before they start that story. I have heard that story so many times I know it by heart. Hey sit down and listen to this story. The story of the Lonely Dreams.

[COLOR=seagreen]seagreen[/COLOR] "Mom I'm home" yelled Kalie as she walked in. She went up to her room and pulled out her diary.

[COLOR=purple]purple[/COLOR] Dear Diary,
Today was just like any other day. That boy Tom still has a crush on me. But he's so......so......so....ick! Well it's now 6:59 pm. School gets out at 6:40pm now. I'm going to bed early. So I can rest up for tommorow's big tests.

-Kalie Mire Siee

[COLOR=seagreen]seagreen[/COLOR] Kalie put her diary up. She turned off the lamp and slept. :sleep: But tonight would be different. Around two in the moring a fire started. But since Kalie was asleep she never noticed. By the time she was taken to the hospital , she was severly burned. She soon went into a coma. She was put on a resperator so she could brethe.

[COLOR=red]red[/COLOR] Kalie awoke but not in her room. She was inside a dream. She looked around but nothing was to be seen. But in the distance she saw a small girl crying. The small girl looked simillar to her as a kid.......



[COLOR=darkblue]darkblue[/COLOR] -Sky

[Guest Goku3]

I didnt really see the story but iwill see it now once i finish sending u this um i dont know how to do anything so for now im just being entertained by ur posts so ill cya plz come see me soon