Writing My Story : Neverending....

[Sky Moonflow]

[COLOR=darkblue]NeverEnding[/COLOR]


[COLOR=royalblue]Someone now please help me
Don't leave me
Please o please
Just come back to me
I want to finish this stroy[/COLOR]

[COLOR=orangered]Callie awoke
"That was weird." said Callie
She looked up from her bed. It was still dark. But where had that voice come from. The voice was childlike. But it was so sad. And full of tears. Callie shook her head. She must have been amanging things. She soon fell back to sleep.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Let me live
Let me die
Let me see
Let me hear
Let me be free
Help me please[/COLOR]

[COLOR=orangered]Callie awoke around 6:30am. It was still early. She walked to her dresser and grabbed her skirt and shirt. She pulled them on. She tiptowed down th stairs. Pulling on her sandles as she went. At the bottom of the stairs she opened the door and went out. She hopped on her bike and left.

She soon arrived at the park. It was now dawn.
"Such weird dreams." said Callie to noone.
she picked a small flower and tossed it into the air. After a bit she dozed off. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Please answer me
Come and follow me
Don't leave me be
I can't stand it.....[/COLOR]


[COLOR=seagreen]-Sky[/COLOR]

[Sara]

[size=1]That's a bit different. I'd vary the prose a bit...you have many short sentences, try alterating longer and shorter ones. It makes it easier to read.

Are you going to continue this? [/size]