Writing Original Poetry

[Megami No Yami]

[COLOR=royalblue]Hey, this is some of my orginal poetry..read..comment..ehh..just tell me whatcha think alright? hehe thanks =P [/COLOR]

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Soul Of Purity and Light

She comes to me in my dreams,
With bold blue eyes
And beautiful, long blonde hair
A lovely smile
And warm touch

With wings so delicate,
Lips so tender,
And a kiss of healing love
She replinishes my soul with a single touch

She keeps me safe and warm within the comfort of her arms
Sheltering me from the cold, and treacherous nights
Taking away the dark,
And bringing forth the light

But yet, her time with me is up,
Because nothing this good, could last forever
So alas my angel departs,
But her memories lie in me still
To wait for her to return,
Yet another day
-Megami No Yami
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[COLOR=skyblue]Whatcha think about that one? I got the Idea from a Yu-Gi-Oh card called "Soul Of Purity and Light" =P hehe[/COLOR]

Hm..this one's really sad..I hope you still enjoy =P hehe

[COLOR=firebrick]The Value Of Love

He kissed me on the cheek,
And whispered goodbye in my ear,
Then walked out the door

I stood there, paralyzed
I couldn't move
What had just happened?
What had I done wrong?
A tear ran down my face,
Then I started to cry

I cried for hours,
Wondering if I could ever bring myself to stop
But I couldn't
I had just realized it then,
While I was crying over him,
That he meant so much to me

He wasn't just that old guy I could find anywhere,
The kind of guy that you would see in everday life
No, he was different,
Much different

I remembered all the times we spent together,
Smiling, and laughing, and having a good time,
All warm hugs he's given me
All the sweet kisses we shared,
And I wondered how I could have let this happen

I felt so bad,
So ashamed of myself for letting this happen
I closed my eyes and wished that I could be back in the comfort of his arms again,
Where he'd hold me forever
And then, for the first time,
I'd tell him how much he means to me.
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-Megami No Yami

Oh! Another one! hehe..Enjoy!

[COLOR=darkblue]Deaths' Call

I stood there, in the water,
Looking out at the sunset
The moment was perfect
Then a crisp breeze whisped past my cheek,
And through my long purple hair
I felt a sudden chill through my body
My eyes twitched,
Then darkness fell
I looked around,
Treadin through the water,
But all my eyes could vision was darkness
I then heard screams, and cries in the distance
I recongnized them as my friends,
I ran to find them,
But the only thing that I found was
Death
-Megami No Yami
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This ones about an Angel..Hope ya like! =D

[COLOUR=deeppink]Angelic Splendor

Her wings spread,
As she took flight,
Fleeing from the battlefield
Her long silky hair flowed with her,
As she flew gracefully over the battlefield,
Shedding tears of love,
For all whom had died,
And for whom all were injured
Suddenly,
There was a peircing sound that shot threw the sky
The Angels' wing limped,
And she fell from the sky
I glimpsed the Angelic being as she was falling,
And ran to grab her
As I was about to catch her,
But she slowly faded away
I looked up,
And a feather floated down gracefully onto my hands,
And would stay in my soul forever.
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Here's another one..kinda sad..but I still like it =P Enjoy!

[COLOR=skyblue]I stood there,
Him infront of me,
Looking at me blankly
I looked into his eyes,
Dark as night
He didn't move, smile nor speak
I touched his hand,
Ice cold
I tried talking to him,
Saying his name repeatedly
He never responded,
Only gave me a confused look,
As if he didn't know who I was anymore
I looked into his eyes again,
I saw chaos, trouble, and hurt
I put my hands on his shoulder,
And layed my head on his chest
I gripped his shirt,
And started to cry
Still, the boy stayed motionless
I hugged him one last time,
Whispered goodbye in his ear,
Then left,
Heartbroken
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-Yami No Megami


[color=gray] Since you're new here, I won't harp too much. But double posting is not allowed. I suggest you read the rules.-Mitch[/color]

[Sara]

[size=1]Welcome to OB. I like them...They're all very good...or else I just like your style. They all seem very soft.

A YuGiOh card, huh? That's nifty. Never would have guessed, heh. I'd like to read more.[/size]

[Megami No Yami]

oh, hehe thanks Ive written more..Ive just gotta put it up =P *goes to post some more of her poetry* =P