Writing Long time, huh? Anyway, a new poem from me.

[Nomad]

[color=darkblue]Boy, I haven't posted here in a while, huh? I'm not going to go through the trouble of ressurecting my old thread, I'm just gonna post right here. Anyway, as I alreadys stated I have a new poem I wanna share. I dunno, I haven't written anything in a while. So what do yall think?


[b]Death[/b]

Death has its own way of messing with you,
hurting you,
controlling you.

It can be seen as a disaster,
a sacrifice,
a sign.

Death can happena at anytime,
with little or no notice,
whenever it feels the need.

No one can stop death,
control it,
postpone it.

The only thing to do is to prepare,
make arrangements,
hope you've done well in life,
hope when it does come,
your death will be quick and painless.

Death brings its touch upon you,
because of your actions,
sins,
good deeds,
whatever it needs to take you to another place.

It shouldn't be feared,
only by those who have wronged,
murdered,
caused pain.

You cannot overcome death,
it is unstoppable,
unprventable,
and unpredictable.

May it bring its touch upon you,
only to take you to a shangri-la,
a heaven,
a paradise,
a dream world.


END


so.....?
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[KittyLynn]

[FONT=century gothic][SIZE=1][COLOR=dodgerblue]Nice. I liked that. I felt the thought there but it didn't seem like you got the right words, you really wanted there. :) Nice job.[/COLOR] [/SIZE] [/FONT]

[Corey]

A nice poem. Like KittyLynn (I keep wanting to say calumon_luver) said some of the words seem a little bizzare.

But still a very well written piece.

[Epitome]

I like the way you show how "Death" takes someone. Its a good poem. You used some cool phrases as to how you cant do anything about i too. Nice job.