Writing Yu-Gi-Oh: Havoc of Godforce

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

365 Million years ago dinasoars roamed the earth. And I care becauce? In the year 2015, a card game has recently come into popularity. It's called Yu-Gi-Oh, and it's based on an ancient Egyptian legend. In Totoyo Japan, there is a school caled Totoyo High. In this school, there is rumured to be a masked dualist called the Phantom Duelist. He is supposedly unbeatable. However, this is just a rumor. Our story starts out with a boy named Darius dualing Natt.
--Natt: I summon my Lord of Dragons in defense mode! Then I play flute of dragon summoning! It lets me special summon two dragons from my hand onto the field! I choose Red Eyes and Ryu Ran! Then I attack your Sword stalker with Ryu-Ran! [D:2100]
--Darius: NO! That was one of my best monsters![B]yfenqtheofq[/B]
--Natt: Now, Red eyes! Finish the rest of his LP!
The black dragon attacks Darius' LP directly, winning the dual for Natt.
--Natt: Damn, your cards suck @#$!
--Darius: Hey!
Later that day, Natt is talking with his friends.
--Natt: Darius' cards are so crappy, I would'nt even say he has a deck!
His friends laugh. Suddenly a hand taps on Natt's shoulder. His friends go pale.
--???: That's not a nice thing to say.
--Natt: What do you know? (Turns Around)
Before him stands a man dressed in all black. He has a backwards cap on his head, black sunglasses, and a black bandana covering his mouth.
--Phantom Duelist: Why don't we decide what I know in a duel?

[Jagan]

Ok. I wouldn't give it a great rating just yet but that was only the start.

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

--Natt: He uses crappy cards like Upstart Goblin and SwordStalker! And anyways, who are you?
--Phantom Dualist: If you must know, I am the Phantom Dualist. And any card can be good under the right circumstances. I will dual you. If I win, you must apologize to Darius and give him one card of his choice as a token of friendship.
--Natt: No Way!!!
--Phantom D: And if you win, you get my deck.
--Natt: Your whole deck!? Let's go! 4OOOLP!
: Natt sets out a dualing mat. Phantom D looks at him oddly. He pulls out some sort of high-teck contraption from his briefcase.
--Phantom D: Shuffel your deck and insert it in here. We'll dual with the holographic Lv.2 dual disk system.
--Natt: What!?
--Phantom D: The Dual Disk projects holograms, as if the monsters were real.
--Natt: Dude! :D
: Natt slips on the dual disk. He turns it on. A smaller disk launches from the bottom onto the ground, and opens up.
--LETS DUAL! [PD:4000/N:4000]
--Phantom D: I'll summon 1 Monster in defense mode! And I'll end my turn!
--Natt: [I]Good. I have both Summoned Skull and Red Eyes in my hand.[/I] I'll summon Ax Raider [At:1700]. Attack his monster!
--Phantom D: My monster is Giant Soldier of Stone[Df:2000]! The recoil dose 300 points of damage[N:3700]! Now I sacrafice my Soldier to summon Sword Stalker[At:2000]! Destroy his monster!
: Sword Stalker attacks Ax Raider, doing 300 points of direct damage to Natt's LP[N:3400].
--Natt: [I]Damn! I need to have at least another turn to get Polmerization.[/I] I summon Mystical Elf in Defense Mode. And then I play MegaMorph! It cuts Sword Stalker's At in half becauce you have higher LP!
--Phantom D: Good move. But I'll summon Left arm of Exodia[At:250]! Then I'll set 1 card face down.
--Natt: Oh, you expect me to attack with Mystical Elf. But I'm not so stupid. Now I'll summon my most powerful monster: Black Skull Dragon! I'll sacrafice Mystical Elf to summon Summoned Skull. I play Polmerization to fuse Red Eyes from my hand and Summoned Skull to create Black Skull Dragon[At:3200]! However, I can't attack until next turn.
--Phantom D: One turn is more than enough. I will beat you this turn!
--Natt: Bull. Not as long as I have Black Skull Dragon!
--Phantom D: First, I play [I]Shining Mirror[/I]! It lets me switch the target of an effect to the oppostie player. I'll use it in combination with Change of Heart. Now I use this combination to switch Exodia's arm to your side of the field.
: The arm is moved to the other side of the field.
--Natt: What are you doing?
--Phantom D: And I play this so called crappy card: Upstart Goblin! It gives you 1000 more LP and lets me draw a card[N:4400]. Now I'll flip my face down card.
: The card flips...Horn of the Unicorn!
--Phantom D: Horn of the Unicorn increaces my monster's attack by 700.
--Natt: But he's still to weak to defeat my dragon!
--Phantom D: Wrong! Megamorph halves when you have higher LP, and dobles when you have lower. Therfore, my monster's At is now 4000, plus 700 from it's horn[At:4700]!
--Natt: But you can't win this turn.
--Phantom D: Yes I can. I attack...Exodia's arm!
--Natt: NO!
--Phantom D: Yes. Swordstalker's 4700 attack power minus Left arm's 250 is 4450. That wipes out all your life points.
: Natt drops to his knees in defeat. Later that day, after school...
--Natt: Hey, Darius!
--Darius: What?
--Natt: I'm sorry about insulting your deck. Here. Take this card.
--Darius: Woah! Your MetalMorph card! Thanks! Here, take this card. It's from the Havoc of Godforce expansion. It's called Black Widow.

[I]If you don't recougnize Shining Mirror or Black Widow, check the Yu-Gi-Oh section.[/I]

[EMU]

d00d, your story has potential. BUT, you really need to work on some character development and the way that you describe your scenes and so forth. Try using more adjectives.
Try doing this. For every object in your story (well the important ones like people and setting for now) describe them. For instance; I have absolutely no idea what this Phantom Duelist looks like. I mean, sure, he is wearing some clothing, but how is he standing? Is he arrogantly got his chest puffed out with his hands on his hips? Is he tall or short? How old does he look, and if that is meant to be indistinguishable, then say so.

And the same needs to be said of Natt too. Is he a wiry little pip sqweek with pimples and skinny arms? Is he a fit looking cocky young teenager prone to having wild adventures?

Describe things my friend, and your story will blosom into a tale. :)

Other wise, it looks promising. :)

[Mina]

Looks good, but do a bit of spellcheck and like EMU said, adjectives would add some lustre.

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

Havoc of Godforce
The ??? cards are cards not yet known.
# Name Symbol Type/Effect At/Df Stars Rarity
001 [B]Godforce Knight[/B] Light Warrior/Effect 4000/4000 10*'s Hyper This card requires three sacrafices to Normal Summon. During each of your standby phases, you may discard one card from your hand to increace this monster's attack and defense by 500. During your opponent's turn, If they play a magic or trap card, you may discard one card from your hand to negate the effect and discard it.
002 [B]Godforce Falcon[/B] Wind WingBeast/Effect 4000/4000 10*'s Hyper
Same effect as Godforce Knight
003 [B]Godforce Dragon[/B]
004 [B]Pharoh's Mummy[/B] Earth Fiend/Effect 2300/1100 6*'s Holo
Effect: While this card is in play, you may activate trap cards from your hand as if they were on the field. You must place them in an empty M/T spot on the field.
005 [B]Sudden Death[/B] Dark Fiend/Flip 500/500 2*'s Silver
Flip: If your opponent flips this card within the first 3 turns it is set, do 4000 direct damage. After three turns, flip this card and do 4000 pionts of Direct damage to your LP.
006 [B]Ancient Force[/B] Dark Fiend/Effect 3000/0 6*'s Holo
Effect:Sacrafice Ancient Jar to Special Summon this monster. While this card is in play, your opponent cannot play any magic cards. While this card is on the field, it cannot be attacked.
007 [B]Shining Mirror[/B] Magic Normal Holo
Effect: When a magic, trap, or effect card of yours effects one player's monsters (excluding their hand or deck), the effect is played on an opponent's monster.
008 [B]Black Widow[/B] Dark Insect/Flip 0/0 1* Holo
Flip: When this card is flipped, ignore damage calculations and equip it to the attacking monster. During your opponent's standby phase, do direct damage to your opponent equal to 1/2 the attack power of the equiped monster.
009 [B]Shatter Chain[/B] Trap Counter Silver
Activate this card when your opponent attacks. The attacking monster is attatched to the monster it attacked as an equip card. Increace the equipped monster's At/Df by the amount the equipped card has. This effect lasts only 3 turns until the equip card is destroyed.
010 [B]Powerfoce Ring[/B] Trap Continous Holo
Activate this card when your opponents summons or sets a monster card by tributing another monster. The monster summoned is unable to attack, activate it's effect, or change position. The monster's attack and defense is lowered by 500 points.
011 [B]Snake Eyes[/B] Fire Reptile/Effect 1500/2000 5*'s Silver
Roll 2 dice. Increace this monster's attack power by 100 times the # on the die.
012 [B]Dice Summon[/B] Magic Normal Normal
Sacrafice one monster to play this card. Roll a die. If you roll a one, you recieve 500 points of direct damage and this card is returned to your hand. If you roll 2-6 you may take one monster from your fusion deck that requires the # you rolled to summon it and special summon it to the field.
013 [B]Dice Fighter[/B] Dark Warrior/Special 1800/2000 5*'s Normal
(Dice Summon: Roll 2) The lowest dice summon.
014 [B]Dice Soldier[/B] Dark Warrior/Special 2300/2000 6*'s Normal
(Dice Summon: Roll 3) A slightly stronger dice summon.
015 [B]Dice Warrior[/B] Dark Warrior/Special 2700/2300 7*'s Silver
(Dice Summon: Roll 4) An above average dice summon.
016 [B]Dice Champion[/B] Dark Warrior/Special 3100/2800 8*'s Holo
(Dice Summon: Roll 5) A powerful dice summon, but not the strongest.
017 ??? Dark Warrior/Special ???/???
(Dice Summon: Roll 6) ???
018 [B]Negate Effect[/B] Trap/Equip Silver
When you equip this card to a monster, ignore it's effect until two full turns later.
019 [B]RedEyesSupremeDragon[/B] Dark Dragon/Fusion 3500/2800 9*'s Holo
(Redeyesblackdragon+RedeyesBlackDragon)
020 [B]Tidal Wave[/B] Magic Silver
You may only play this card if Umi is on the field. When you play this card, all Fire element monsters are destroyed. In addition, the attack and defense of all monsters excluding Water element monsters are cut in half. All equip cards are destroyed. Electric monster are uneffected by this card.
21 [B]Torpedo[/B] Trap Silver
You can only play this card if Umi is on the field. During battle phase, you may play this card and allow one monster to directly attack your opponent's LP.
22 [B]Water Flow Machine[/B] Magic/Continuous Holo
You can only play this if Umi is on the field. The effects of any of your cards equiped to a water element monster also effects all of your other water element monster. The monsters are considered to be equiped with the card also.
23 [B]Dragon Slayer[/B] Fire Warrior/Effect 2000/1900 6*'s Holo
Effect: When this card attacks or is atttacked by a dragon monster, the dragon's attack and defense become 0.
24 [B]Sword Master[/B] Wind Warrior 1800/1200 4*'s Normal
A powerful swordsman who wanders the land in search of new swords.

[Guest ACW]

Pretty good cards, but what are the ??? cards?

[Jagan]

Cool. What are the ??? cards. OMG, I got a PSV booster yesterday and I got the Buster Blader Holo/Silver.

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

: In a dark room, a man sits at a desk, staring at a tv screen. It replays the dual between Phantom Dualist and Natt. The man is shrouded in darkness. The only thing visable is a jewel shining on his hand. Another man stands behind him, also shrouded in darkness. He is tall and muscular.
--Desk: It seems that the savior has returned.
--Guard: Are you sure it's him?
--Desk: Natt is a very skilled dualist. However, he was beaten by this Phantom Dualist in 4 turns. He is definantly the one I'm looking for. Send Mr.Eygite to dual this figure.
--Guard: Yes, sir.
: Meanwhile, Darius is dualing once again. He and his opponet are using the Dual Disk system. His opponent has summoned Gia the Dragon Champion[A:2750], while Darius has Which of The Black Forest and Battle Ox on the battle field, both in attack mode. He also has one card face down. Both players have 2000 LP left.
--Opponent: Now I'll attack your Which! Go, GIA!
: The Dragon Champion, riding on the ferocious chariot, charges at the Which, destroying it. The recoil sends gusts of wind thru Darius' red, spikey hair. At first, his reaction seems hopeless. Then a grin blesses his face.
--Darius: (Raising his hand in a commanding manner) Which's effect has been activated. When sent to the graveyard, take 1 monster from your deck with 1500 or less defense and add it to your hand. I choose: Summoned Skull!!!
: A wave of fear overcomes his opponent.
--Opponent: S-Summoned Skull!? But it's not strong enough to beat my dragon.
--Darius: Not yet, but watch. First I sacrafice Battle Ox to summon Summoned Skull.
: Battle Ox disappears in a burst of energy, and Summoned Skull appears. The creature stares at it's advasary with an evil grin.
--Darius: Now, I flip my face down trap: Metalmorph! It increaces Summoned Skull's Attack by 300, plus 1/2 the attack of any monster it attacks! Go, Summoned Skull!
: A coating of metal covers the creature. Summoned Skull rises, and in a burst of lightning, destroys the opposing creature.[O:1425]
--Darius: Now, I play this card:Monster Reborn. I'll revive Battle Ox. Battle Ox, attack his life-points directly!
: The Ox charges, slaming his hologram Ax into his opponent, and finishing off his opponent's LP.
--Darius: We played a good dual.
: The opponent shakes Darius's hand. Suddenly, Darius notices someone looking at him. She is a youngh girl about 15 (his age), wearing a light blue school girl uniform. She has light brown hair, and an angelic face. She signals him to approach her. He walks over, dumbfounded by her beauty.
--Angel: Hi, my name is Angel. I saw you dual.
--Darius: (Blushing)H-Hi.
--Angel: I don't dual that much, but I can see a weakness in your deck. Your monster's are'nt intially strong. Here, take this. It's the first card I ever recieved.
: She hands him a card.
--Darius: A limited Edition Blue Eyes White Dragon! But-But-
--Angel: I know you'll take care of it. It's in good hands.
--Darius: W-W-Wow.
: That day, a sign is posted on the walls of the school. It's a challenge for a dual. It's supposed to be held between Phantom Dualist and Mr.Eygite, a teacher at the school.
[IMG]http://www.findyugiohcards.com/Img/XUJK/1021029052028.JPEG[/IMG]

[Guest ACW]

Dude, now we've got a girl in the mix. What's the deal with the Desk dude?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

: There is a crowd of people standing outside Mr.Eygite's classroom. The door opens. The croud of people walk in. The desks in the class room have been moved to the walls. A man stands there with a dual disk attatched to his arm. He's tall and skinny. He has on a white shirt and black pants that really need ironing. He has a bowl cut and glasses. His nose is sharp and pointy.
--Mr.Eygite: Seems my opponent has'nt come.
: A voice rings out from the crowd.
--Phantom Dualist: I'm right here.
: The crowd seperates, revealing a tall figure dressed in black. He is wearing black gloves, and a black trench coat. On his head,he has a backwards cap, dark glasses, and a black bandana covering his mouth.
--Mr.Eygite: So, You came. I'v studied Egyptian legends since I was youngh. I won't be beaten by the likes of you.
--Phantom D:Then Lets Dual. 4000 on 4000 sound okay?
--Mr.Eygite: Sure. And I'll go first...
: The 2 dualists slip in thier decks into the dual disk. They activate the dual system. A hologram disk comes out of the bottom, opens up, and projects a holographic battlefield.
--Mr.Eygite: I set one monster in defense mode. End.
: Mr.Eygite stands there with a sinister look on his face.
--Phantom Dualist: I'll summon Harpie's Brother in attack mode[At:1800]. Then I set one card face down on the field. End.
--Mr.Eygite: I'll set another monster in defense mode and set a magic card. End.
: Phantom D Studdies his opponent's face. He realizes his plan.
--Phantom D:[I]The face-down cards must have flip affects. He's also planning to sacrafice them to summon a more powerful card onto the field.[/I] I'll sacrafice my Harpie's brother to summon Pharoh's Mummy in attack mode[At:2300]. Then I place one more magic/trap card on the field. End.
--Mr.Eygite: It seems that you did not prevent my monster from being summoned during your turn. So one of your face-down cards is designed to prevent the summoning. So I play De-spell. It lets me look at one card face down and destroy it if it's a magic card. I choose the secound one you placed down.
: The card flips up and is revealed. It was remove trap. The card was destroyed by De-Spell. However, Phantom Dualist seems calm regardless.
--Mr.Eygite: Now I'll activate my monster's flip effect. It's Trap master. The effect will let me flip your other card, and destroy it if it's a trap.
: The card flips, revealing Trap Hole. The card is destroyed. Once again, Phantom Dualist stands there, arms crossed, not caring about his destroyed cards.
--Mr.Eygite: I'll sacrafice my face down Sangan and Trap Master, so that I can summon Dark Magician!
: The two monsters disappear, revealing the Dark Magician. Suddenly, Phantom Dualist thrusts his arm forward.
--Phantom D: NOT SO FAST! I'LL ACTIVATE: PowerForce Ring!!!
--Mr.Eygite: You have to have it on the field to activate it!
--Phantom D: Yes, I do. However, the effect of Pharoh's Mummy lets me play them from my hand. Powerforce Ring will disable your Dark Magician and drop it's attack and defense[At:2000].
: Mr.Eygite seems shocked.
--Mr.Eygite: NO! But wait! I can activate my sacraficed Sangan's effect. It lets me take a monster with 1500 or less attack from my deck and place it in my hand. I choose Ancient Jar.
--Phantom D: Well, with your Magician weakened by my trap, I'll attack with my monster, that is after summoning 7 Colored Fish[At:1800]. Now I'll Destroy your Magician with my Mummy! Attack!
: The Pharoh's Magician [At:2300] throws out it's right arm, sending a bandage strait at the Dark Magician, destroying it. [E:3700]
--Phantom D: Now, I attack with 7 Colored Fish! Direct assult!
: The fish charges at Eygite, who lurches back. [E:2000]

[Jagan]

Nice. Pretty good so far, but I agree what about desk dude and Natt, Darius, and Angel. What's up with them?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

: Although he's down by 2000 LP, Mr.Eygite dose'nt seem worried. In fact, his face has an evil grin on it.
--Mr.Eygite: I'll summon: Ancient Jar! In attack mode![A:400]
--Phantom D: [I]Why would he play such a weak monster? It must be some sort of stratagy. Mabey he wants me to attack. I'll wait and see how he finishes his turn.[/I]
--Eygite: Now I'll sacrafice it to Special Summon this card onto the field: Ancient Force! Becauce it's counted as a special summon, I can do it in one turn!
: The Ancient Jar on the field begins to crack, then it bursts open. In it's place is a swirling vortex with the Jar's evil face in the middle.[At:3000]
--Eygite: Attack his Mummy! Go! Ancient Force!
: The monster opens it's mouth, letting out a wave of energy at the Pharoh's Mummy. The mummy lurches back in pain, and explodes.[P:3700]
--PhantOm Dualist: You may have beaten my mummmy, but you can't defeat my Megamorph magic card! Once I equip it to your monster, it will cut your monster's attack in half!
--Eygite: Sorry, but as long as Ancient Force is in play, you can't play any magic cards or attack ancient force! It's unbeatable!
--PHantom D: [I]That card can be beaten. I just have to wait until I draw the right card.[/I]First I switch my fish to defense mode.Then I set one card in defense mode and end my turn.
--Eygite: Not much else you can do. Attack, Ancient Force!
: The monster launches another attack. The face down card flips, revealing Electric Lizard!
--Phantom D: Electric Lizard's effect! During your next turn, Ancient force can't attack!
: Eygite looks shocked.
--Eygite: NO!
--Phanotm D: Now I'll summon another monster onto the field. Then I'll end my turn.
--Eygite: I'll skip this turn. Go ahead.
: Phantom Dualist draws his card. He stares at it.
--Eygite: Well?!
--Phantom Dualist: I set one card in defense mode.
: Eygite seems thrilled.
--Mr. Eygite: Big Mistake! Attack the last monster he set!
: The Ancient Force lets out another burst of energy.
--Phantom D: Looks like you were left with an older model Jar.
--Mr.Eygite: What are you talking about?
--Phantom D: You activated my monster's effect: Cyber Jar!
: The face down card flips, revealing a robotic looking jar. Out of it's eye it fires multiple beams, hitting all the monsters on the field.
--Phantom D: The Cyber Jar destroys all the monsters on the field. Then, we pick up the top 5 cards from our decks, show each other, and special summon the all level 4 or lower monsters onto the field.
--Eygite: My monster![I]That monster was the strongest I have.[/I]I drew Dark Magician, Pot of Greed, [B]Ancient Jar[/B], Remove Trap and Garnicia Elephantis. I set Ancient Jar in defense mode.
--Phantom D: I drew [B]Vorse Raider[B], [B]Ax Raider[/B], [B]Giant soldier of stone[/B], Swordstalker and Reverse Trap. I summon Vorse Raider, Ax Raider, and my Stone soldier in attack mode. It's still your turn, Mr.Eygite.
--Mr.Eygite:(Dissapointed)I'll end my turn.
: Phantom Dualist draws another card.
--Phantom Dualist: It's time I ended this dual! First, Ax Raider, attack his Jar!
: Ax raider charges at the Ancient Jar, destroying it.
--Phantom Dualist: Now I'll summon my most powerful monster! I sacrafice Vorse Raider and Giant Soldier of Stone to summon: BLUE EYES WHITE DRAGON!!!
: The two monsters disappear. The battlefield begins to shake, as a huge beast begins to emerge. It's a mettalic looking dragon with blue eyes. The Blue Eyes White Dragon[At:3000].
--Phantom Dualist: Now that you have no monsters left on the field, I'll destroy your remaining LP! Blue Eyes, attack!
--Mr.Eygite: NO!!! Not that!!!
: Mr.Eygite is white with fear as the dragon opens it's gaping mouth, and fires a burst of lightning at his LP.
--Phantom Dualist: You have lost.

[Guest ACW]

Is it just me, or do you have to read this twice before you can figure out what's going on? By the way, why have'nt you answered our questions?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

: In the dark room, the man sits behind the desk. He pushes a button on his desk to call the secratary.
--???: Secratary?
--Secratary: Yes sir?
--???: Send in the dice man.
--Secratary: Yes, sir.
: A few min later, the door opens into the room. Someone walks in. Due to the lack of light, he is unable to be seen properly.
--Dice Man: Yes, Master Fate?
--Fate: (desk dude)My people inform me that a girl named Angel has aquired a Blue Eyes White Dragon. I'd like for you to find her, beat her in a dual, and take her Blue Eyes. Simple enough for you?
--Dice Man: I'm one of your best dualists. Why are you getting me to do such menial tasks? What about Blade? Or Drago?
--Fate: You know they're in training to use the... new cards I gave them. You are one of the few left. I'd get Mr.Eygite to do it, but he seems unreliable these days.
--Dice Man: I'll go dual this girl. And I'll bring you back a Blue Eyes White Dragon.
--Fate: Excellant.

: Later that day, Angel is walking to one of her classes. Little dose she realize that she's being followed. She turns around. No one. She continues on. However, around the corner is Darius. He's been following her.
--Darius: Wow, she's so cute. Even the way she walks.
: An overweight boy walks up behind him. He's chubby and has short, curly hair. He's also short himself. He's wearing a DragonBall Z T-shirt. His name is Wave.
--Wave: Why do you always have to follow her? You know the only reason she gave you that card is she felt sorry for your deck.
: Darius turns to him and says smartly--
--Well, that's funny. I'v beaten you about a dozen times.
: Suddenly, a scream is heard. Darius runs around the corner. Angel is backed up against a locker, catching her breath. A tall man stands there with a grin on his face. He has long, spikey, black hair. He looks like this guy:
[IMG]http://duel-monsters.com/gamepicsdice/Dungeon%20Dice%201.jpg[/IMG]
--Dice man: Looks like I scared you. Your names Angel, right? Looks like I hear right. You are beautiful.
--Angel: Thank-You. What do you need?
--Dice man: Sorry, but I need to dual you. Winner takes the loser's rarest card. I need to get a blue eyes white dragon.
--Angel: I'm sorry, but I don't have it anymore.
--Dice man: (becoming angry) LIAR!
: Suddenly, Darius walks up to Dice man. He seems angry. Real Angry.
--Darius: You don't talk to my friends like that. She's not lying. She gave the card to me. I'll dual you!
: The Dice man seems humored.
--Dice man: Darius, I persume. I'm called the Dice Man. I'm way out of your leage. But if you insist...

[Jagan]

Cool. A lot better than the story I am working on right now. It sucks.

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

--Wave: Hey,man. Let me dual him. I'll do it! I can use my water cards.
--Darius: No. Besides, you don't even have a dual disk.
--Wave: My mom's getting me one tomorrow-
--Dice Man: (agitated)We don't have time for this. Dual me, Darius.
--Darius: 4000 LP! Ready
--LET'S DUAL!
: The blades on the side of the dual disk swing together. Then it slides to the side. Each player draws 5 cards.
--Dice Man: I'll go first. [I]Good, I drew Dice Summon.[/I] I summon Rouge Doll in attack Mode[At:1600]. Then I set one card face down and end.
--Darius: I'll summon, um, Ax Raider in attack mode!
The field opens up and Ax Raider appears[At:1700].
--Darius: GO! Ax Raider!
--Dice Man: (calmly)As to be expected from a novice like you. I acticvate my trap card: Skull dice. It lets me roll a dice. Then I decreace your attack power by the number on the die. Let's roll!
: Out of his pocket, Dice Man pulls out a large die. It's re and purple. He throws it onto the field. It lands on three.
--Darius: No!
--Dice Man: Rouge Doll, counter attack.
: The doll lunges at Ax raider, and destroys it[Da:3800]
--Darius: First move luck.
--Dice Man: Luck is what the world is truely about. Skill is on the side. Now it's my turn. (draws a card) See, look at my luck. And my skill will help my luck. I sacrafice Rouge Doll to summon Snake Eyes!
: The doll disapears into the arena. Then, two dice drop down. A snake is wraped up thru the holes in them[At:150].
--Dice Man: Now I'll use his effect. I roll two dice and increace his attack by that number.
: Darius seems nervous. Dice man throws the dice. The number is: 9.
--Dice Man: Now my monster's attack is 2400. Good roll, don't you think.
: Darius dose not answer.
--Dice Man: Just trying to have some fun. Attack his LP directly, Snake eyes!
: The snake withdraws into the dice, and launches fire thru the holes in the die.[Da:1400]
--Dice Man: Looks like you bit off more than you could chew.
--Darius: The game's not over. [I]I'm sure this card can turn this game around.[/I] I set one M/T card face down and play Flash Assailant in defense mode.[Df:2000]
--Dice Man:Fool. His power is lowered by 500 points for every card in your hand. You have 4, making his defense 0! Attack, Snake Eyes!
--Darius: (smartly)Not so fast! I activate: reverse trap! It reverses any changes to attack and defense. Therefore your monster's attack is 900 and my monster's defense is 4000!
: The snake attacks, only to be thrown by the assailant into Dice Man's LP barrier.[DM:1100]
--Dice Man: Good move. Very good. Just for that, I'm going to summon my most powerful monster. I play this card. It's called Dice Summon. I have to sacrafice Snake Eyes first.
: Snake eyes dissapears.
--Dice Man: The card reads: Sacrafice one monster to play this card. Roll a die. If you roll a one, you recieve 500 points of direct damage and this card is returned to your hand. If you roll 2-6 you may take one monster from your fusion deck that requires the # you rolled to summon it and special summon it to the field.
--Darius: So you have the new special type?
--Wave: (confused)What are special types?
--Dice Man: Your friend is an idiot. A special type is a card that goes in your fusion deck, and is summoned differently than a fusion monster.
--Darius: Yes, they were introduced with Havoc of Godforce Expansion.
--Dice Man: You know your cards. So I'll roll the die.
: Dice Man rolls the die. It lands on...4.
--Dice Man: Not a 6, but it will do. I special summon: Dice Warrior![At:2700] Since I'v allready gone thru battle phase, I will end my turn.
--Daruis:[I]How can I beat this creature now? I'll need to draw something good. I draw...Horn of the Unicorn![/I] I sacrafice my monster to summon: Summoned Skull![At:2500]
: The monster dissapears and Summoned Skull rises from the field!
--Dice Man: You still can't beat my monster!
--Darius: Then I equip it with Horn of the unicorn! Now his attack is 3200! Attack his dice monster!
: The Skull attacks the Dice Warrior, destroying it.[DM:600]
--Dice Man: I underestimated your luck. But now I'm going to finish what I started. I play Monster Reborn! Bring back Dice Warrior! Then I'll set two cards face down on the field!
--Darius: I'll return your monster to the graveyard with summoned skull! Attack again!
--Dice Man: I activate Reinforcements to increace his attack by 500 points.
--Darius: Still not enough.
--Dice Man: Then I play Graceful Dice to roll another die, and increace my monster's attack by that number. Roll, dice Roll!
: He rolls the die. It lands on three.
--Dice Man: Just enough to counter attack! Destroy summoned skull!
: Summon skull attacks, but is destroyed by the Dice Warrior.
--Darius: I'll summon Kuriboh in defense mode and play multiply. Now I have 5 Kuribohs.
--Dice Man: Well, I'll just pick them off. I summon Cyber Raider in attack mode.[At:1400] Now, attack a Kuriboh, both my monsters!
: Cyber Raider and Dice Warrior each attack a Kuriboh. Now only three remain.
--Darius: You made a big mistake playing a secound monster. I will play Change of Heart! Take over Dice Warrior!
--Dice Man: NO!
--Darius: Then I'll sacrafice it and my original Kuriboh to summon: Blue Eyes White Dragon![At:3000]
--Dice Man: But-but-
--Darius: You wanted it? Here it comes! Blue Eyes, white lightning attack his Cyber Raider!
--Dice Man: NOOOO!
: Blue Eyes sends a surge of lightning at Cyber Raider, finishing off Dice Man's life points. Dice Man drops to his knees in defeat.
--Dice Man: You-You're not a novice. I'm sorry. Here, you can have this. It's Snake Eyes. Take it.
--Darius: Thanks. But don't ever mess with my friends again.

[Jagan]

Very good. SMS, did you get my PM?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

--Fate: So, Dice Man was unsuccessful in his assignment. I think I'm tired of loosing. It's time the show these mortals the meaning of Havoc of Godforce. Secratary?
: The secratary walks in. She seems pretty youngh and attractive. She has brown hair and glasses. She also has red lipstick on. She is wearing a brown skirt.
--Secratary: Yes?
--Fate: Inform Blade to find the Phantom Dualist. Tell him to get his Blue Eyes White Dragon.
--Secratary: Yes, sir.

:Later that day, after school, the Phantom Dualist stands guard.
--Phantom Dualist: [I]I have a bad feeling about today. I'd better be on guard.[/I]
: Suddenly, a figure jumps out of the shadows, with a large sword in hand. He lunges for the Phantom, but he dodges the attack. The figure looks up. He has spikey blond hair. He is muscular and dressed in black. He has on a leather jacket and holds a high-tech looking sword in his hands. It's large.
--Blade: Hello. You must be the Phantom Dualist. I am Blade, a servant of Fate.
--Phantom Dualist: And what is it you want?
--Blade: What all who have come before me want. A dual.
--Phantom Dualist: Then I must accept. What are the conditions?
--Blade: 8000 LP. The winner takes the loosers rarest card. I will go first.
--Phantom Dualist: That's fine. Dual disk activate!
: The dual disk on the Phantom's arm snaps into place. He loads his deck and launches his hologram. Suddenly, the sword that Blade is holding begins to change. It turns into an odd looking Dual Disk.
--Blade: Begin! I start by summoning Neo the Magic Swordsman in attack mode! [At:1700]
--Phantom D: I'll set one monster in defense mode and set a magic card face down.
: Blade looks unaffected.
--Blade: I'll summon Masaki the Legendary Swordsman in defense mode. [Df:1100] Then I set one Magic card.
--Phantom Dualist: This dual is going no-where. So I'll sacrafice my monster to summon: Sword Stalker[At:2000]! Attack Neo!
: Sword Stalker raises his sword, and strikes his opponent, destroying it[B:7700].
--Blade: I Play call of the Haunted(my face down card) to bring Neo back from the grave. Then I summon another monster in defense mode. And I set one card face down. I end my turn.
--Phantom Dualist: I'll attack again with Sword Stalker on your reborn Swordsman!
--Blade: Not so fast: I activate my trap: Negate attack. It prevents Swordstalker from attacking until next turn. [I]When it will be too late...[/I]
--Phantom Dualist: Fine! I end my turn.
: Blade draws his card. He suddnely starts laughing. Laughing uncontrollably.
--Blade: I will summon the card known as Godforce Card #001.
--Phantom Dualist: Number One!?
--Blade: I sacrafice all three of my monsters to summon a monster like no other. Arise! Godforce Knight!
: Blade's three monster dissapear. The ground begins to shake. A creature begins to rise from the ground. It's covered with black armor. It has two glowing red eyes. And it holds a gigantic sword.
--Blade: Behold! Godforce Knight! [At:4000] Attack Swordstalker!
: The creature waves it's sword, and in a mighty burst of energy, destroys Sword Stalker. [P:6000]
--Phanmtom dualist: I will play this card: Dark Hole! It destroys all monsters on the field.
--Blade: Then I sacrafice one card from my hand to ignore the effect of the magic card! It's part of Godforce Knight's effect!
--Phantom Dualist: Then I set one card in defense mode and end my turn.
--Blade: Good. At the start of my turn I can discard one card from my hand to increace Godforce Knight's attack power by 500! Then I attack agian! Destroy his monster!
: The Knight Attacks again, destroying his monster easily.
--Phantom Dualist: [I]His monster keeps getting stronger, and I can't play any magic cards. How am I supposed to beat this thing?[/I]

[Guest ACW]

I have a question. It repuires you to sacrafice 3 specific cards to summon Gate Guardian with 3700 attack, and 3 specific cards to summon the Big magnet warrior(I ain't spelling it's damn name). Nither of these cards have any effects. However, your Godforce Knight card lets you sacrafice any 3 monsters, has 4000 attack power, and has one hell of an effect as far as I can see. So don't you think that's kind of too powerful?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

--Angel: Did you here what happened to Natt?
--Wave: Natt? What happened?
--Angel: He got beat real bad. He lost one of his Red Eyes.
: Natt walks up to them, dazed.
--Natt: He used Monster Reborn. He brought back a dragon. It was huge. I could'nt play any magic or traps. And it just kept getting stronger...
: Meanwhile, Phantom Dualist continues to struggle with the awesome power of the Godforce Knight.
--Blade: Why don't you just give up. You can't activate any magic or trap cards during your turn, and there's no hope that you'll defeat my Knight.
--Phantom D: There has to be a way. (draws card) I'll set this monster in defense mode.
--Blade: All you can do with my Knight on the field. And since it's my turn again, I think I'll power it up again. Now his attack power is at 500! You have no chance to defeat my mighty warrior! Attack!
: Once again, the knight slashes his sword at Phantom's monster, destroying it.
--Phantom Dualist: I'm not out of the game yet. I know I still can stop your assult. But for now, I'll set another card in defense mode.
--Blade: Pathetic. But at least you don't go down without a fight. First, I'll discard another card to power up my knight.Then, I'll summon my Bistro Butcher onto the field. It has 1800 attack power. Now, Godforce Knight, attack his defensive monster!
: The Knight lets loose another assult.
--Blade: Now I'll attack your LP directly with my Butcher. Attack!
: The butcher attacks. [P:4200]
--Phantom D: You forgot about your monster's effect. When Bistro Butcher atttacks directly, I get to draw two cards. (draws 2 cards) [I]The whole dual might rely on this next draw. Please, please be what I need.[/B](draws)
--Blade: Putting too much fate in your deck has cost you your Blue Eyes White Dragon card, hasn't it?
--Phantom D: I set one card in defense mode...and one card face down.
--Blade: You know you can't activate any magic or trap cards! I sacrafice another card to increace my monster's attack once again! Now I attack your defensice monster!
--Phantom D: First, I activate this trap card. Your monster can only block them on my turn. And the card is: Magic Thorn!
: Thorn covered vines come out of the card and cover Blade's half of the field.
--Phantom D: Every card you discard dose 500 points of direct damage to your life points.
--Blade: What!?
--Phantom D: There's more. Your attack may have destroyed my monster, but my Needle Worm's effect is still activated. It makes you discard 5 cards from your deck. And with that, Magic thorn dose 2500 points of Direct damage![B:5200] Will you attack with your Butcher, and let me draw 2 more cards? Or end your turn?
--Blade: I set Bistro Butcher in defense mode and end my turn...

[Jagan]

Nice. What happened to Natt?

[Guest SuperMaxSonic]

--Phantom Dualist: [I]It seems I have turned the tables. I need to take advantage of this.[/I] I set another monster in defense mode, along with another face down card.
--Blade: [I]This can't be happening! I will rid myself of this novice![/I] I sacrafice my Butcher card to summon Sword Stalker![A:2000]
--Phantom D: With that move I can activate Trap Hole to destroy your Sword Stalker! Now only your knight is left.
--Blade: Attack, Godforce Knight! Destroy him!
: The knight attacks Phantom's face-down card: Morphing Jar!
--Phantom D: Morphing Jar requires both of us to discard our hands and draw 5 new cards. And since you must discard 5 cards from your hand, that makes it 2500 direct damage due to my magic thorn card! [B:2700]
--Blade: You'll regret the day you messed with me. It's your turn.
--Phantom Dualist: Very well. First, I set one card in defense mode and yet another card face-down on the field. Make your move.
--Blade: [I]I'll have to destroy that monster.[/I] I attack your face down monster!
--Phantom Dualist: Negate Attack! Activate! It blocks the attack of your card! Now I'll make a move that will end this dual! I activate the effect of my monster: Invader of the Thrown! It lets me control one of your monsters! Now your monster is under my control!
--Blade: My knight! No!
--Phantom Dualist: Now, Godforce Knight! Finish his Life Points! Attack!
: The Godforce Knight attacks Blade, finishing the dual.
--Phantom Dualist: I believe that Knight is now mine...

[Jagan]

Woo hoo hoo! Very, Verry Good!

[Ben]

The Invader of the Throne would have gone to your opponent...But I still think you would have finished him off. :D