LostProphet Posted June 10, 2003 Share Posted June 10, 2003 OK, written late one night (or early one morning) when I was trying to go to sleep [SIZE=3][color=red]Broken Hopes[/SIZE][/color] Falling on my thoughts Feeling the stabbing pain All I can think of is What I have left to gain The pressure's overwhelming I have no time left to choose The World's falling around me Do I win or Do I lose? Can't see through my closed eyes Why do I even try? Is it because I can't take the pain or can't I stand to see you cry? Broken Hopes Shattered Dreams Why do I even try If I can't stand to see you cry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 That was a really good poem. Try writing in the middle of the night more often. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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