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If you don't know Modern Dreams is a story posted in the Adventure area of this site, created by DJ Tatum.
I like to consider myself a co-creater, since we worked together on the story.

Well, anyway I created some pics of a few characters from this story, and have decided to post them here for everyone to see.

My first pic is of Silia, the Zarcadian Guardian of Light. Me and Tate both worked on how this character should look.

So, please tell me what you think.:D

[img]http://home.earthlink.net/~twc3365482238/silia.jpg[/img]
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[b]Here's the rule:[/b] The Art/Graphic Design Forum has a very specific purpose: members use this forum to post their own artwork and discuss it with other members. With that in mind, it is very important to remember that post quality is, once again, important in this area. Posting something like "Whoa! That's cool!" is simply unacceptable.

So you see, just saying "Nice" isn't an acceptable post. The moderators here want you to explain what you like about a pic, or how it can be better.

Just thought you'd like to know.:D
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Guest legeto
Well I think the Otaku Should cut down on some rules I mean I work at a forum 10 times the look and better as this and there rules are have fun not be strict about everthing And How much do you want to bet me ill get penalized for this because I have a right of opinion but oh well I guesse this forum is to strickt and I only post here becuadse the one I work at is down
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I love it. You are a really good artist with these drawing stuff eh? But about the CGing... I think you should add a bit of more shadows and light ya know... It adds more to the artwork.

Legeto: It is the forum's rules, there is no use in complaining and saying that they should be less strict... Just follow the rules and everything will do right I guess...
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The rules are considered strict by many people who visit the more casual forums with less shame, but these forums have been like this for a very long time and the many people who post here accept that. If you do not like the rules at these forums, you don't have to be here. Go to a forum like Infinite Forums. Or KissDBZForums, which is really awful now.

I'm not saying that the forums you work at are shameless but OtakuBoards is very peaceful and we have a lot of pride in the cleanliness of the board. If you do not agree with our ways, there is no need for you to be here.

Back on topic, I really enjoy the art. The only part I don't seem to enjoy is the hair color. I like the darker blue, but the bright blue is a bit much. Good work :)
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It doesn't even matter. Strict or otherwise, all you said is one freaking word. This isn't a chat room. If you would have just wrote 2 sentences instead, no one would be saying anything and you wouldn't have to post a couple more times. Saves you the time as well, so I don't see the problem in it.

And honestly, isn't basically making a post with really nothing other than saying something is spam, spam as well? lol OH well.

Anyway, I think it's pretty good. I don't really like the way the lines pop out to be honest. With some good shading, I think it could turn out really well. You might want to make some of the lines a bit smoother, but still, very nice.
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I like the rules here easy to find stuff without going through useless posts well enough of talking bout this

Nice pic like Semjaza said about the line popping out at ya is cool and i like the colour of the wings not thats plain white it has some texture and shading will go a long way but i downside i dont like the lines in the hair showing the shine but it's just me with that one.
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Dude! o.0...
It's pretty good but her...um... can I say breasts? Well anyway they're too big. But overall nice, you could shade her face a LITTLE more, and put a little more details in the eyes. Over all its a great pic.
Edit: She reminds me of Pam Anderson Lmao!:laugh:
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by legeto [/i]
[B]Well I think the Otaku Should cut down on some rules I mean I work at a forum 10 times the look and better as this and there rules are have fun not be strict about everthing And How much do you want to bet me ill get penalized for this because I have a right of opinion but oh well I guesse this forum is to strickt and I only post here becuadse the one I work at is down [/B][/QUOTE]
You [i]work[/i] at a forum, and yet you do not use proper grammer or have any indentations in your posts? I wouldn't want to post there. o_O

Your right to your opinion is there, but limited to our forum rules. If you come and start spamming, you can't just wave your behavior away with "it's my opinion to believe that spamming is fine." That's basically what you're doing, and it doesn't work like that. If you can't respect the rules set forth on this forum, then you can leave. And if you think the moderators are too strict here, then I suggest going to Otaku Lounge and reading the thread entitled "Poll: Moderators too strict?" Once you finish reading the whole thread, then by all means - post your opinion on it. :)

And this ends the discussion on legeto's behavior. Any further posts on the matter [i]will be deleted[/i]. We have an image to rate here.
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[SIZE=1][COLOR=dodgerblue]I like it! Her..features..are just a little too big. I mean there is nothing wrong with it, just they are bigger then her head. O.o But otherwise, I think it is awesome, and you should post more of your pictures, because this is so good. ^^;;

-Kitten[/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Putting that Legeto business aside, thanks for all your feedback.

I've now decided to post my second Modern Dreams pic. This character's name is Gideon, Zarcadian Guardian of Shadow.

[img]http://home.earthlink.net/~twc3365482238/gideon.jpg[/img]
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he looks creepy, wich means it really looks good the eyes are kinda weird actually, but i really like the face lines and the eyebrows even if theyr a bit big...
looks really good i really like it, does he have a body though?
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You could have given it more depth with a little more well-placed shading, but I think it's very nice. I like her hair color... the green and blue... man, now I want to change my hair. That's cool.

The second one.. yeah, the shading, but nicely outlined and colored.
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Heres yet another character from Modern Dreams. Its Gimeron, the main bad guy of the story.

Its a bit rough around the edges, and I think his armor's color scheme could be better. What do you think?:therock:
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Guest legeto
actualy the forums I work at are 10 times better and most of the time at the otaku there only 50 people on outta what 4000 thats pretty pathetic and half the people Ilook at they say o post(s) per day Then it sats 0
Im not saying these forums are bad or anything becuase I do enjoy some of the thing like how you get replys but they are a little strickt and Im not saying the rules make them a bad forum but people realy get nice ideas in there head and think to many things all I said Was [b]THE RULES ARE A BIT TO STRICT[/b]
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Guest legeto
hhahahahahahaha I said nice and he started talking about spam spam is going blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah in about 100000 diffrent threads and all I said Was Nice picture


[b]all he had to say was thanks[/b]
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Think I care what you do to this account ive been banned once because a moderator was being a di ck head and I said chill out and I was banned and even your site director though that was harsh and then the modertor changed my post to **** you baster im gonna kick the **** out of you and It says )Whateverhisnamewas)Has cahnged this post on some date
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What the hell?!:laugh:
Well I guess after the moderators see this your gonna be banned. Sorry you went off the deep end about this whole thing. Why didn't you just PM the moderators personally?

Oh and by the way I did say thanks, check the post. Hell I even tried to make you a Trigun banner.:therock:
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Thanks for bringing this to my attention, WW2. That was exactly what you needed to do.

legeto has now been banned, you won't have to deal with his nonesense anymore. To other moderators, I hope you can see why I skipped over the warning altogether.
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