Guest Majin Buu Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Heres one.. Gone.. Lost.. Forgotten.. Everday i keep walk away from the world down a endless road that leads to nowhere and i cant look back because if i do ill just keep walking walking away from everyone.. The farther i walk the less and less people remember me.. I try to turn around and walk back but.. my friends are pushing foward more and more.. They wont let me turn around.. and ill continue walking until.. Im Gone.. Lost.. Forgotten.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Author Share Posted June 18, 2003 Ok, this an old poem. So I don't really remember it, I have a title now thanks to shadO magE, thanks shadO magE. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tears to ashs-ground to ground,[COLOR=red]Title by shadO magE[/COLOR] Many tears Ashs of what it contains The one insdie will always be Never sun, nor light may shine As it has always been, it will forever be Only a box of dust in the ground Inside and out will, they will both return to the ground So in the ground we pray it stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 i like it, its quite good. well heres a title not sure if it fits it or not i think it does though. title- tears to ashes, ground to ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 Alright heres my next one, know that this one I'm taking off the top of my head. There for it might not be very good, this will be the last one of the night though. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Standing there... Standing there I saw you I watch you go by in the crowd You just ignored me, when I had waited for you Standing there in the crowd Watching you go by You've forgotten me Standing there I saw you leave Fade into the crowd, and forget me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 People do that all the time. I hate it when someone just walks by you without saying something. Escpicially if you know them and they know yoiu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 This is a poem I wrote last night...playing video games. Really ironic any ways I started to think about all the people leave each other so I wrote this. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Regretful dream I have meat many people in my life Most leave but others forget I remember all of them I shall never forget what I once said I visit all of them I've met in my dreams, but those dreams always end in sorrow Yet, I always go back to see them once again I live that regretful dream once more Only to end with tears once more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 That was great. Many people go through that experience. Also you spelled a lot of words wrong in that. But it could have been a typo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 Ok, thanks dayday. I went back and edited the mistakes on the last one. I can't spell very well, which is just really sad.I wrote another poem, although I don't know what for.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If I, If I bring tears to your eyes, let them roll like thunder If I bring hate to your mind, so then you may kill me If I bring anger to your heart, then so scream out loud at me If I am ignored by you, I shall fade but you will not Know this you shall not fade from my heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 They would definetly fade from my heart if they yelled at me or killed me. Absolutley if they killed me. But if it was just yelling, I might let them off easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 Yeah maybe, but if they killed me it just depend if I was close to them or not. Plus I couldn't forget them even if they killed me becasue if they had the chance to get ride of me they'd have to be close already. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Refuse Refuse to break my promise Refuse what you once said I refuse not to rememeber you I refuse to let you go Refuse not to care Once my mind is set, I refuse to change my feelings I refuse to just forget I rather die then to forget you I'd give my soul away, just to rememeber you my friend.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 I refuse to not remember that poem. Plus, the person can just walk up to you and kill you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 As I once said before, I'd have to be pretty close with the person to let them get that close. And I'd have to really, really, care for them so much that I wouldn't care what they did. Anyways here's a poem about hate. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hate... I can not hate you No matter what you do, or for what you say I shall not hate you For you were, or what you will be I can't forget, I will never hate you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 That was great, I loved it. Hate is a strong word to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 I don't get why people think the word 'Hate' is all that strong. No matter I've come up with another peom by listing to rock music. I have really funny ways of writting poems. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Empty Smiles Every where their wearing masks All their empty smiles They go through all their lives with smiles through troubles just with smiles One day they'll keep those faces They'll always have an empty smile, but they'll never know why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Hate is a strong word. If love means you want to be with a person forever, hate means that you never want to come in contact with them the rest of your life. It even says in the Bible that you're not supposed to hate anyone or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 Ok, dayday I won't use the word 'Hate' here anymore. I still don't like that spirit thing I might give a try for like 2 days then go into rage. So pretty soon you'll be seeing poems about rage, at least it's something new for my poems... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Broken Truth Dreams are turn into nightmares, just because of the truth Toys become broken, from the truth of a child's love Happyness turns in to sorrow, just after the truth of the lie A life for ever in sorrow from truth At times I think it's better to know only lies Then to ever know the broken truth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emme888 Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 I really love your poetry, it's sad and dark, and yet all the while a breath of fresh air. I really enjoy reading them...keep posting them, and keep up your artistic flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 I don't mind if you use the word 'hate'. It's all the same to me. (Then what Emme888 said above) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 20, 2003 Author Share Posted June 20, 2003 Thank you both. Here's the next poem I wrote today, sounds kinda funny though because it was made up of the titles from a book. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dark Messenger Judgment day will come soon, for the Sliver Knight Who in battles for the daemon Daemon of darkness, the one he loves She is the Dark Messenger, who is to take his soul She is the one, that shall be his end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 20, 2003 Share Posted June 20, 2003 Cool, maybe I should try doing that with the titles of books. Great poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 21, 2003 Author Share Posted June 21, 2003 Here's the next one, but it's short. Just because I was starting to fall alseep and I got too deep into thought. It's another one that dosen't have a title though. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Forget your past, then you'll forget your future Forget the future and the past, then you forget your-self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 I thought you might like another person's POV, other then daydays. Even if you don't, I'm giving it to you anyway. Your poems aren't too bad, oh the whole. There are a few problems with spelling, but thats to be expected from everyone. I hate to be picked up for things like that, and I dont know why I do it to other people. The only thing I really don't like is the uniform length of them. Most of your poems seem to be quite short, and all bout the same length. Each person has their own style, but personally I find that I need length to express myself totally. Yeah, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 21, 2003 Author Share Posted June 21, 2003 I'm a 12 year old kid want do you want from me? I like writing about this stuff! You don't like it read some one else work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thinking of what I said Thinking of what I did I shouldn't have swayed I should have thought, thought of what might happen Would I hat you? Find a friend, a commander, fall in love? The current tides had changed I didn't think of the future But that's just it, I wasn't thinking about the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 I didn't say I didn't like it. I was just giving my opinion. If you don't like my opinion, you don't have to take it on board. For a twelve year old, you're very insightful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 21, 2003 Author Share Posted June 21, 2003 Yeah, what ever... :grumble: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This sound This sound it runs round Round in my head This song it never stops I know not what it is, or where it's from Alone in silence I hear it The song, the sound, the pain of the rytham A sad melody this song This sound runs round Never ending, never stopping This sound, it will stay forever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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