Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 I never read that book before. It sound interesting through the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 I don't think you'll be able to find it for a few years if you wanted to read it. It has a very fun plot line. The next one is because of the comic book I've just started to read. It's very....um....vil....um...funny, and lots of gangsters and abusive. I guess that sums it up well. ~~~~~~ RedMoon In your eyes I see then moon But it's lined with blood and sorrow In your eyes I see Azlar's death, and the "Sun's" new begining The RedMoon tells all, of your past and of your future But the life potion may change the tide, it may change the RedMoon in your eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 That's an uhh...interesting comic. RedMoon. Kind of reminds me of Silent Mobius. The moon kept turning red when they showed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 It's weird but fun to red, I like Silent Mobius too so that might be why I'm reading it. Anyways here's my next poem. ~~~~~~~~~ Title-none Choas and sandness has turned into sorrow The silence has yet to be broken That one tear that was shed, it has been lost in that wave of darkness for some time I've sent my prays, they've been lost across all time and space I have yet to hear a word I've have not be seen nor heard I've been forgotten, and now fadeing from this world Yet I can not bring my self to end my life How weak I am to try and wish Hope to be remembered, yet lost because of my own hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Title-Relief, like it? Takes all the things in the poem and comes out as relief. *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 I have nine things that are occupations. And i only get payed for four of them, that's sad...The tilte relief would work, thinking back to the first poem that started it all. ~~~~~~~ Round creation Huo The huo will cover us all It will leave only ashs in it's mist Huo will pass by, leaveing no one behind To feel the sorrow of the ever lasting flame Feng Feng blow away the sorrow, ash fly round and round Blow away ash made by Huo Ashs into feng, then into ground Help huo grow Shui Shui put out huo, and help create feng Down poor of rain, will help the lives of earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 I have 4 occupations and I don't get paid for any of them. You're lucky. Is huo ashes, feng fire, and shui water. I think you put it in the next 2 lines to show what each meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Huo is japness for fire, Feng is wind, and Shui is water. Fire can grow by lots of wind, yet the tides of water make the wind, and then water puts out the fire. It's kinda confuseing. ^^;; I think I'm just gonna put up a few song lines that keep repeating in my head for now. ~~~~~~ I just relate to the world around me, I know my dreams, they will carry me far So far away, into the wings upon blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 that poem with the Japanese is realy good. and so is the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Thank ShadO MagE! Glade you and dayday liked it. ^^ ~~~~~~~ title-none What ever I do, they say I do it worng They always judge me, pointing out what I do wrong I'm tried of it All the things I do, all the things they make me do They all have it for their own well fair Never mine, they have no concern Well having concren, or not I'll do the taskI'll carry them out to my best It will never be enough for them So I'll keep trying, and keep doing it wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Okay I'm sure I won't remember that huo, feng, shui thing. That last one relates to me a lot. Everyone is always finding something wrong with what I do. Esp. Ms. Faucett, the teacher I mentioned eariler. I've never done anything right for her. :P :P :P :P 8P 8P 8P 8P :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Teachers...they're the most annoying of all. Some are evil, I hate it when you fail and other people get on your case....I can't find my note book so here's one off the top of my head. ~~~~~~~ Title-none Looking in to my eyes, and you rip up my soul To hear your voice is pain Just to have a memeory of you, a thought of your name It creates tears in my eyes How long I was loyal to you? There is no mesurement time You never cared for me, yet I for you And all along, you knew nothing of this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 That poem is exactly how I feel about my teacher. Except for the love parts. I have to do everything she says and yet she just ignores me most of the time. (starts to scream and runs around breaking stuff) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Teachers get on my nerves, they talk too much. And tell people what to do all the time. ~~~~~~ Title-none Cry a river of tears, no one will hear your plee Try to help them understnd, none of them will listen Try to understand what they think of you, and why they hate you You'll never figure out, because they can not see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 I don't like it when people see or hear me cry. They start to worry and stuff. Then they bug you to death trying to get you to open up. Half the time I was crying because of something on t.v. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 I don't like crying periode, for some resone I think it makes me weak. If I cry now people would think I saw stabbed or something like that. I hate crying! I can stand it! ~~~~~~~~ The things I know aren't real All those people always watching me, To see my next move to conter Change the world around me, just for an experiment I don't matter, just a mistakeThey try to test my limits, one day they'll find out Just what I can do, they'll find out That they've been bushing too hard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 I don't like to cry either but people do know me for doing that a lot. My teacher made me so mad I started to cry real hardin the middle of class. My knee was shaking and I kept clenching my teeth. Everyone was staring and aksed me if I was okay and one of my friends kept trying to calm me down. After that my teacher took my notebook with my songs in it and kept it for 3 days. Everytime someone asked me if she gave it back I would say no and they would ask if I was okay again. About your poem above I think it makes sense to probabaly over half the world. Everyone is always forcing you to do things and pushing you around. Oh, now I'm starting to write too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 Your not writting too much. Anyways, I hate crying! ~~~~~~ title-none Round and round the song in my head On like a spinning wheel, ever rolling The music is beatiful, but sadly it can not go on forever All things must come to an end one day It's the same as life You go on living, till one day you just... you just wine...down like a music player And then your broken and no wants you any more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 5, 2003 Share Posted July 5, 2003 Ok then I'll continue. Anyway the teacher called one of the issistant principles and he made me apologize to her for interrupting her class. When she was the one who should have apologized to me for taking my stuff for no reason. Then I asked if I could go to the nurse because I got sick for crying so long. I went down to the office and layed down. I accidently fell asleep because I was so tired from trying to control killing my teacher. I got in trouble for sleeping in the nurses office and the nurse lied on me. I told her my stomach hurt and she told the teacher that I said my head hurt and I wasn't feeling good. So then I got in trouble again for no reason. Then again I got in trouble for not being class for a lesson. I fshe wanted me there she shouldn't sent me to the nurse in the first place. Ok, now I'm sure I'm writing too much. If you want to know the rest tell me and I'll PM it to you. Back to the poem the title should be 'Silent Song'. It fits well into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 Your teachers sound evil. Ok, PM me the rest! I'd like to hear what happened. And the name silent song, it sounds good. I wrote this one because it's the July 4 and we set off 20 fire works! And still have some of them! ^^ ~~~~~~~~~ Gun Powder Gun powder can be much fun, set it off and watch it run Through the sky with colors so bright Pliss and cheer, just of burning gun powder Colors fade then come back Be careful with it though, it can hurt when abused Colors of the gun powder burn so bright, all in honor of the night ~~~~~~~~~ From this poem it make me sound like I'm crazy for fire works, well I'm not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 There was a firework show where we were but I didn't go. My aunt did and she said it sounded like they were setting off cannons it was so loud. Sorry I didn't post yesterday, I had to get up 5 in the morning and get my hair done then I had to hurry so I got my dress on at home and then went to the church. Then I realized I forgot my scarf. *sigh* Then after that was over I had to go to the reception. It took forever and I got sick from all the heat. 3 headaches in 1 day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 6, 2003 Author Share Posted July 6, 2003 Hehee..you had to wear a dress. ^^ ~~~~~~~~ Awake I can't wake from this dream Some one take me out it This dream is hunting me, with good memeories that aren't mine I don't wish to be here My desire is to see my own past And yet I'm here to stay till I awake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 That's not funny, lover-girl. ^^ So you better awake from that right now. Heels and a dress for 4 hours aren't nice on a hot day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 6, 2003 Author Share Posted July 6, 2003 8 P That name's not funy, but you haveing to wear heels and a dress is funny. ^^ ~~~~~~~ Image There's an image in my view I can't quite see it, yet I kow it's there But it's just an image It will soon fade, but then it will come back I'll find this image in my dreams This image will be unvealed, it will then leave my memeories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 um i think i missed something.... but good poems i realy like [i]image[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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