Guest Nintwa Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 The Story Of Society crisp and crackle the fire scorches her skin red and cracked from societys harsh burns stumble and fall the floor cools her face sleek as ice from societys wet floors wilt and rot the flowers slowly decay brown and black from societys short memory rise and keep going higher up she goes clear as crystal white as snow to heavens open doors I just jotted this down in notepad, comments are greatly appreciated :-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobi Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 AHHH! ITS NINTWA! Glad to see ya back...and i hope you stay longer this time :therock:. Lol, anyway, the poem. Like i said on AIM i think it is VERY poweful and give you a good image of how society can kill...nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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