Guest dayday Posted July 8, 2003 Share Posted July 8, 2003 Was the 'hee' a laugh or a 'he'? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Darkness is there I can see it But yet I can't It's time to leave it alone And fade back into a deep sleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 8, 2003 Share Posted July 8, 2003 It was hee as in heehe. But I messed up on what I was writing so here's it edited. "And tears from stars, hee it sounds nice." As you can see I forgot the it, and missplaced the 's. Anyways being able to see darkness, and yet being blind to it al the time is true. You can see darkness...kind of but you can't really see it because...Well it's dark. I don't know I'm confusing my-self now. Anyways fading back into deep sleep would be nice. Also leaveing the darkness alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Promise through my hopes That fade into my past Following me around in this world Never letting me be alone Fading away from the past And burning itself into my future Taking control of my life So I can never be whole again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 That's a good one. Your past going into your future so that you loose a part of your self. And your past is gone so that means that the propose is to find your past in your future...I just confused my-self. ^^;; Anyways I like the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 You confused me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 I think I need to stop thinking so much when reading poems. I just end up confuseing my self and others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Humpty Dumty sat on the wall Humpty Dumpty had a great fall All the kings horses and all the kings men Couldn't put Humpty together again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 O_o And yes, Humpty died. I still don't like rhyming, who even came up with the idea of humpty dumpty? And you spelled dumpty wrong the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 8P I'm still a better speller than you. If you don't like rhyimg then here. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm surrounded by you But what do I do Is this really true That you feel so blue I said to you Please call me Sue So that's what you do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Hahaha very funny, it still ryhms. But I do like it, being surronded by some one with no way out. Feeling sad and blue, but I don't get the "call me sue" part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Neither do I so just live with it. Next one kinda sucks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Open up to the world With the depths of your heart Tell the world how you feel Tell all the people around Express yourself and be free Don't contain yourself from those around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Well...not bad. But it'd be kind of hard for people to do. Considering some don't like to be open with their feelings. Anyways it's still a good poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Yeah, you're right about that I guess. But I'm still right about everything else. This one's a tanka. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Life is imaginary It will take you anywhere People different They try to hurt you But you still have to face it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 I like it, it reminds me some how of destaniy and fate. ^^;; strange... Yet having to face the things that may hurt. And always walking on. That thought I really like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 That was harder than the rest. It took about twice as much time to think up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Fate will bring us together No matter who's there We will always be there for each other That's why I met you I knew you would be a friend A true friend to me Never like the others Always teasing me But one that loved me The way I do you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Fate bring two friends together, nice. I like it, the thought of entreanl firendship will always last. ^^ It's great, the part with teasing too many people do that to there firends. Also this made me think more people need to think more about how the person would feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Good point. That's why I'm telling Acira something to make him feel better. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That place The one that raised me That place The one that fed me That place The one I called a home That place The one that helped me That place The one that left me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Being the place that was always there for you, till one day it left you. I like it, having been there for you. It brings to mind symbloz'em (sp) Anyways i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Yeah like my old school. Everybody there knew me then I had to leave. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Life Life Life Life Is Is Is Is Life Life Life Life No No No No Matter Matter Matter Matter What What What What Life is life no matter what Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 O_o deep...very nice. ^^ I liked all coming together perfectly in the end. Life is life no matter what, its the same as death always being death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 These are much easier since I only have to think up one line. This next one everyone has said once in their lives. Except one person I know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Leave Leave Leave Leave Me Me Me Me Alone Alone Alone Alone Leave me alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 I don't see how can I person ever not say those three words. I have no clue who could'n't say that in there whole life. I like the poem though because I use those three words alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 The person is a 5'6 girl who's never combed her hair, has a nappy head, wears the same clothes everyday, bounces when she walks, and if you want to hear the rest let me know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Known Known Known To To To Not Not Not A A A Single Single Single Place Place Place Known to not a single place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 I like this one too. And I don't think I want to know the rest of the story. Sounds kind of weirs though. Anyways I like the poem. With ot being known any place. I had thought you were going to put person but place would be it too. Being not know to a person nor place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 These are a lot easeir to do. I'll think it'll be the poems for the rest of the day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Peace Peace Peace Peace Be Be Be Be Still Still Still Still Peace be still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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