Sky Moonflow Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 Vampire. I move silently I move swiftly Moveing thoughout the night Showing no fright Entering the house upon the hill Moveing in shadows Towards the room where he lays I lick my lips hungerly I slowly pull him from the bed Touching his lips ever so tenderly I perice the skin on his neck And let the sweet red elixer flow upon my lips He flinches as he feels slight pain But luckily he dose not wake When I have finished I remove my mouth Wipeing the red elixer from his neck I lay him back in bed I open the window and take my leave I move swiftly into the night I leave only one mark Those two small holes on the neck Will you be next... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 Good poem, it sounds like a dream my friend once had. Whee, love hearing about vampires!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 That was real good. Vampires aren't used a lot in poems. It's knid of a new thing. Oh and you spelled moving wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by dayday [/i] [B]That was real good. Vampires aren't used a lot in poems. It's knid of a new thing. Oh and you spelled moving wrong. [/B][/QUOTE] [COLOR=royalblue]Well, you haven't been here long. Because me and my blood sisters [yes, I have those here], have written tons of poems about vampyres. If you don't be lieve me, scroll down a bit or go look at my posts in "Today's Poem." BTW, nice poem dear.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 Oh sorry bout that. I didn't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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