Writing I gave you my heart

[Shadow Night]

This is one of my poems, im not sure what people will think but I havent posted for a while:
I gave you my heart, my beating soul. I wanted you to hold it, keep it for the eternity that we live.
But dreamers are destroyed by bittersweet dreams; my dreams were torn from me with everything I see.
Your beauty shrouded my eyes, covered them in a silk lie. I would have loved you forever; I want you to know I always will, until the day I die.
But I want you to understand that the pain I feel will remain, you?re lost love, I will never regain.
Things will never be the same.
I?m a shadow of the past, a true ghost, at last. I?m as faded as the truth I believed in, I?m as faded as the lie that became my love.
If only you?d see what I see, if only could feel what you made me. Maybe your love would be as blind, and I?d be less alone in the world. Our world.
I could cry a thousand years, I could let fall a thousand tears, but nothing I could do, would replace my heartfelt love for you.
You broke my heart. My beating soul.

[Epsilon]

Good...keep writting. Covered with a silk lie, loving them forever. Sounds like true love.

[Shadow Night]

Thankyou. Lets just say I was inspired by something that happened to me, this was the only way I could show what I felt. Heres another I wrote a while ago, I dont want to keep opening new threads just for my poems.

Sadness in my eyes, I have seen the lies. I loved you, but why did I even try?
Sadness in my eyes, love lost, dies.
My heart shattered like ice, once it was stone, but now it is nothing more than a reflection of my pain.
Heart broken by words unspoken. Hearts of stone are not unbreakable. They are alone.
Sadness in my eyes, even the devil cries.
What once was beauty is now nothing more, than what once was. A memory of life, a shadow of love, an empty eternity. The sadness in my eyes lost to countless tears, the sadness of life lost to countless years.
Sadness in my eyes, caused by lies, or the truth of what we are.
We are nothing: we are everything. We are the line drawn in the purest sand. Beginning and ending, before we even started.
This is pain, my pain, the sadness of my eyes.
I understand the memories lost to times cruel torrent, why can?t you?

[Epsilon]

Wow, all the poems you put up are better then the last. I love your writting style. The feel to every thing is just so real, it great!!!

[Shadow Night]

Do I see?

Do I see the Sun rise at dawn?
Do I see it fall at dusk?
Do I see.
Do I see.
One thing is certain, you are truth.
My destiny.
I must listen with my heart to the song of the birds, the calm of the sea, the silence of life.
Do I see your face in the sand,
Do I see you swaying in the wind?
Or is it a ghost I see, imprinting the pattern of eternity.
Death is life,
Life is death,
So what is love, if not purity.

[Epsilon]

Ohhhh, *clapps*...Very nice. A ghost in the wind and in eyes view. Write more...death is life, love purity, I love it all. All of them are great!

[Shadow Night]

If you want to enter some of your poems for a chance of being recognised, you could do worse than [url]www.poetry.com.[/url] Im not sure if links are allowed, sorry moderators.

[Epsilon]

I'd rather that I'm not recognised, although hopefully you are. Your great at writting poems.

[Shadow Night]

I suppose if thats how you feel. But if youve got talent you should be more confident. Its true though, my poems are very personal, im not sure I could let the world see them.

[Epsilon]

It's just a matter of how you feel. If you think that it's personal, just keep it to your self or you can tell the one you trust most. It's all on what you think of it.