Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 At least I got one out of two right. ^^ Now I get it, roses don't hurt people with their trons on propose. But they do anyways because it's some what a form of defense to protect it's self. And that it's not their fult. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 yep exactly now you got 2 outa 2... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Hee...never thought of it like that. I always thought it was "Beatiful Hybred often have torns." Or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 i close my eyes but i only see you. a voice on the edge of my dreams taunting me i run for it but never find it i search and search but i hear it from with in a past love i still long for the truth ive seen sense then has taught me you taught me i long for you but you run away always at the edge of my sight i can never find you though i look i beg you to just let me see you one last time but i can never catch you always out of reach my dreams have started to seem real walking though the waking hours in a daze longing for the sleep that will return you to me i miss you but i can never reach no matter what i try longing for the return to darkness, to wipe the tears from my eyes the sands of time go away one by one leaving me less and less time to find you my hidden love the hidden truthes and broken lies which i was told i wake up in dreams and sleep in reality never wanting to wake up coming closer each dream but never reaching you so i never return to the waking world these dreams seem more real now then ever i can smell the roses you wear the sweat on my brow as i run for you i can feel the air taste the wind i think i have awoken in a dream never to sleep again but i am happy i have finaly been able to reach you so i stay here with you never to wake up or go asleep i cant remember which this is any more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Cool! A different perspective of line 4 artical 5, a dream on the sleepers eyes. Not knowing if we are dreaming or if this really is reality, or if our reality is som one else dream. ^^ Always trying to catch some one in a dream would be really hard. Great poem, keep it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 will do. got kinda bored of writing dark poems thought id do a different one this time and i actuly managed ^_^ nomraly i cant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Yeah, I know what you mean. Some times I can't think of anything to write that's about something sad, forgotten, or fading. But it changes my writting style when I don't write about something like that. Plus I like reading things about dreams, there fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 the portal opens and i walk through you scream you see the blood running from my skin it is not mine you still seems worried you move away from me but still you look at me can you not make up your mind my own blood starts to run freely from the wounds i cam back i returned like you asked but you back away from me you confuse me these wounds are from making sure you would not be hurt but is that all i am to you? a body guard fine i shall protect you if thats all you think im useful for so dont try to talk to me any more i shall protect you but do not expect me to confort you you have others for that i would assume. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 ^^ Wow, cool, the person is only thought of as a body guard. Sad though, the other person didn't under stand they had those wounds protecting them. I like it, proves more in the fult in some human hearts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Yes, I like that one, it's very nice. Also I like the different feeling it gives, it seems one-sided, is there love in there somewhere? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 3, 2003 Author Share Posted July 3, 2003 alone in this world of datkness i leave only to be pulled back in by something someone but im alone yet something keeps me from leaving this lonelieness like some one here longs for company but im alone and i keep leaveing only to be pulled back when i get hurt like something here is trying to protect me but i dont want to be alone id rather be hurt please let me leave and live the truth and lies im told i dont care i just dont want to be alone any more im living a lie here protection from my self and from you i feel like im living with the world passing me by i want to live i dont want to be forgotten i wake up with eyes wide shut go to sleep with them open living in a dream and a lie please i want to leave stop pulling me back in to protect me so let me leave or i shall rip my self out of here you cannot hold on to me forever no matter how you want the darkness the holds me is finaly gone the light blinds me but i dont care im finaly free so i leave this darkness and i am free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 That's a great one! ^^ Being pulled by an unknown force back into the lonelyness (sp) I really like, the force wants to protect yet it's hurtting at the same time. It's longing to have you there and keep you there trapped. And the person is longing to be free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 Yes it is! The feeling in this one is very nice! I mean it's interesting. This sort of reminds me of Tsukasa, if you don't mind me saying. Do you think so Ruby? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 Kinda, it reminds me of Tsukasa and Morgonna. Morgonna trys to keep Tsukasa away from the real world, and anything that may harm him. Just for her own selfish resones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 portals open, nightmares close, doors arose, and lies exposed. pain and hate bliss and happyness. running in circles to keep heading forward fire burns me to the ground i raise back up only to be stuck down these lies have been exposed and the truth blown open so i run for the light the light to leave the darkness to reach nirvana. save my soul by sacrificing my body i must survive this test if i dont i shall be banished back to the darkness so i must survive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Cool, that could be turned into a plot line then a book. It'd sell well if it was. ^^; Anyway I really like the poem. One thing begins, other things end, and some become exposed. And new door ways to a different roads open. The thoughts are great, so it's great. ^^ Survie the test to see the light and to live freely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 well there is a story ive written i just dont want to type it up i wrote it down on paper and its like 24 pages or something and i realy dont feel like typeing it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 That's true. *nodds* I have two different virsons of one story just becuase I didn't feel like typing it up while I was writting it, I did it at the same time. They're the same yet differen't . Your story is probley good, as I can tell from all your other writtings your a great writter. ^^ So I'm guessing your good at comeing up with plots and writting stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 maybe... hmm i think ill post it one day when i get realy bored or something just please put up with the horrible spelling im not trying to run it through spell check... way to many errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Hee, that'd be ok. Because I terribly at spelling my self. Never want to read my books before edited. *Every word is error* I need to spell better then I do already. *spelling grade C+* Terribly sad at spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 same ~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~¥~ title: toy ice shards penitrate my heart. pain tears through it. my love has just hurt me. she has left me for no reason... i was a toy. nothing more then something to pass the time with. HOW. COULD. I. HAVE. BEEN. SO. FOOLISH.? i... i dont know i am now nothing more then useless she has just ripped my heart out she may have well laughed in my face as she did it i could see the laughter in her eyes. she left me with out a word i note with six words on it - you were a toy. nothing more. that was the last thing i saw of hers... i burnt it along with the rest of her stuff she left me she used me... she just condemed me to a slow and painful death... a death of lonelyness i was truely happy when around her. but she was just useing me. i am truely worthless. i couldn't even see the deception that was staring me in the face. i was so foolish to think some one would care about me. i am now nothing more then a shell no need for friends or emotions. all they did was hurt me and enjoy the torment they put me through maybe i should end it all... maybe i should just end it... maybe. maybe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 a dead rose with petals falling tears fall like acidic rain on someone who doesnt care he is waiting for death to take him with tears running down his cheeks and blood running from his chest he runs to the edge of the cliff and jumps hitting the blood red pool at the bottom he just adds more red to it another unknown person who killed him self his tomb stone -name: unknown -death: suicide -reason: lonelyness, a life of pain, a worthless life -people who cared: none who would care about some one as worthless as this? the name of that person is... pointless who would care? no one... i know because i am that person... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 It's great, I just really hope you don't feel that way. ^^ (I'm almost finish with your pic.) I really like the poem though, the way it shows some one's life then having thme say something at the end when they're dead. I really like the add in of what it says on the grave stone. Hee I like the top one too, nothing but a toy. Like a pawn in life. I love it.^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 6, 2003 Author Share Posted July 6, 2003 ok and no i dont feel that way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 ^^ That's good to hear. Hee I don't want to spam so....I'm gonna ask a question. On a grave stone they don't put cause of death, do they? I wouldn't know because I'm not allowed never gaves or anything like that because people say I'll try and make the dead rise, or something close to that. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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