Epsilon Posted July 10, 2003 Share Posted July 10, 2003 ^^ I like it. Starting with a new begening, starting off clean. The dawn brings about a new world. Yet at the same time having the ehcos of the past still remain there. Just all into tiant the world. The purity is gone because of what the world was to do to gain the purity, humanity is gone. And the burden of humanity is gone, yet the world's still tianted. The feel you get from it is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 10, 2003 Author Share Posted July 10, 2003 death creeps up on me nightmares silver stained blood pain hate spilt paint coloring everything red nothing breaks nothings fixed the camera angle shows nightmares gold colored lies a sweet demise death comes longingly away empty handed red paint covers my eyes making me see the world in blood stains so I spit up even more blood having been shot in the back haunted houses broken record tracks that skip jump and see people break others stay alive only to hate the spectrum of colors pass my eyes incoherence starts to take over words spew out of me solid form liquid venom you get to see the real me the one whose view on life is all screwed up pain seeps out of him destroying his disguise only to be fixed by a false love silver colored lies red colored pain black colored death circus clowns bounce around faces painted to hide them selves run around scared of the lies hidden beneath the pain white bight sun burns into my soul wrecking me destroying me tearing me apart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 10, 2003 Share Posted July 10, 2003 O_o Clowns...Shadowing your other thoughts and walking you up to a different place and making your views different. Only to spew your mind. ^^ I like it. Having things only out lined to the true fact. It's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 10, 2003 Author Share Posted July 10, 2003 uh.... that was coherent? i could hardly understand it my self. o_O edit with next poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 If you can't even under stand it your self...how'd you come up with it. More or less of the time most people know what they're writing. lol I don't see how you couldn't get it when your the one woh wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 12, 2003 Author Share Posted July 12, 2003 pain is gone replaced by an utter lack of any thing i have become unfeeling for the time being it is truely a good feeling right now nothing waying down on my mind i dont care about any thing any more let it fall where it will its no big deal no consiquence to me nothing matters to me any more my past pain forgoten the future pain gone and the present pain gone so i leave the pain behind and go away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 12, 2003 Share Posted July 12, 2003 Leaving pain behind, and going on. ^^ I like it, because it shows what every one shoul dlearn to do. Forget their pain and go on. And leaveing all the burdens, let them fall. All the pain is gone. It's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 13, 2003 Author Share Posted July 13, 2003 night falls as people die. fire burns in the darkened sky hate breed as the fire grows my anger fuels the light the fire burns me i am reborn anew out of the pain and spite death and lies become my friends they protect me keep me alive blo0od stained ground is the trail i leave pain taking steps the paths that i weave golden darkness and painfull light holy sins and unholy lies end this false life and wake up to this desguise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 13, 2003 Share Posted July 13, 2003 ^^ I like it alot. For some resone it reminds me of Pirates of the Criban: Black Peral. But ignore that. ^^;; Heh, anyways the thought is great. Having been in your heart the hate grows, which makes the fire grow. So dose the light, and to wake up from the lies. So that the lies and death may protect you. It's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 13, 2003 Author Share Posted July 13, 2003 [color=silver]death has past me by. left me in its wake a shattered crystal which was once my heart now cuts me from the inside pain wells up inside be but i swallow it back down it matters not im useless why do i even keep liveing no one cares she's gone she didn't even care no one does pointless i am pointless worthless hopeless pathetic no one cares so i care not any more i should end this but im scared of the unknown i have been ripped up so when i die no one will cry or care no flowers just shallow unmarked grave so i should just end it but im stuborn so i dont good bye you dont care so i dont know why im even saying good bye good bye[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 14, 2003 Author Share Posted July 14, 2003 [color=silver]Dark stared night pain is hightend nothingingness bliss dispair anti hate played agian and again masks that hide what we truely are you people all wear masks are you scared to show your true selves? the monstares that you release on the people who dont where masks yes i beleave you are scared... you where masked mask the pain that you think justifys your torment of others but you never think about what your doing to the [i]others[/i] you never see the handi work of your torment and when you do its when your stairing down the barrel of a gun held by them the ones that you break they eather kill them selves or you they arnt depressed actuly they are normal well as normal as you would be after being tormented like that not deserving that you laugh at them you are shallow you think you are the greatest but you are nothing you arn't worth the air you breath or the space you take up but it is not my place to judge those who must be judged i wish it was but you are lucky it is not so get away from me before i end your life instead of mine.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Poem 1. I really like poem one. Having a shattered heart that cuts from the inside. Broken hearted giving up hope, cause no one cared. Then once ogne unmakred grave and saying good bye when good bye is nolonger needed because there is no one to say good by to. ^^ I'ts great, I like the thought behind it. Poem 2. Then next one I like more then the one before it. It's really good, cause to me people do were mask. ^^ Yeah, I'm weird for saying that. Anyways I like the thoughts in this one too. Because not being the one to judge, yet needing to be judged. So they're left to laugh at others because the one to judge them hasn't yet. Having a gun to one head or another, and having it be their desions to judge them. But sounds kinda like they draw back into a voide. ^^ This one is great also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 14, 2003 Author Share Posted July 14, 2003 [color=silver]You people leave me alone don't you know I'm crazy from the pain the waking hell you people put me though im tired off being mister almost perfect mist doesn't do any thing wrong you people have broken me one of these days im going to get you back but not now not until im ready to die never, then so you have no reason to worry so worry not i wont be the one to end your life so it doesnt truely matter what i want to you i am nothing nothing but some one to take up the time when your board i try to be nice to every one but you people must make fun of me i did nothing to deserve it except get mad when you did did you find it funny? if you did then you are sick what happens when you break some one doing that? they turn the table but its not emotinal its phsyical they break you with guns and knives they end you to end there own torment but you never thing about that you think its funny its not and it wont be when you break the person then you get what you deserve but the law says that the ones who judged you wernt fit so they end there own lives you think of it as a murder what about them when they do that it means you have killed them you killed their innocents and pureity but you only care about their physical body in the terms of murder so they defend them selves but with death because you dont listen to their please for you to stop you care not and then you get shot you get what you deserved and i wont shed a tear over you.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 I like it. The thought is good, because people do that all the time with no care nor concern for people they're doing it to. And then they never go back and think about what they had done nor said. So once the person is gone they think it's the person's own falut, when they were really just trying to get away from it all. Heh I'll stop now. But anyways it's a really good poem. ^^ I really like this one more then the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 15, 2003 Author Share Posted July 15, 2003 [color=silver]They say jump! i jump they say run! i run they say die! i leave they say im worthless i beleave they say im hopless i beleave they say im crazy i agree they sayim good at some thing i thing they're lieing they praise me i dont beleave them no one can care about me it has to be a lie so i leave i leave the praise that i miss the people telling me im worth some thing i leave that behind because it must be a lie they cant care because every one else said they didn't so why should they...[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 15, 2003 Share Posted July 15, 2003 I like it. ^^ They say to do something you do, they say to die you leave, then once they prais you, you leave. Just because of the first people putting lies into the persons head. And wandering why they care when the others didn't. Hee...I like it, because of the wandering why and the others. Very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 15, 2003 Author Share Posted July 15, 2003 [color=silver]Silver pain falls in sheets like rain Like the strom rains down blood trying to drown me in sarrow i swim in the blood swim away from you you care that im running away but only because thats one less person for you to torture so i leave i hope your happy youve just about killed me you have killed everything that made me a kid i have felt to muvch pain to still be called that so why do you insist on calling me that i live in my mind alone away from you all away from the pain[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 15, 2003 Share Posted July 15, 2003 Trying to drown some one in rain that's close to blood. ^^ I like it. The thoughts are good and the way it's written is good too. I love the fact that the poeple aer still called children when they have had too much pain to be a child. I love that part, for some resone. And being alone and hid your self with in the reachs of your mind to exscape pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 15, 2003 Author Share Posted July 15, 2003 colors swirl before my eyes is this death? is this bliss? no its a dream an escape from reality you dont know me no one does so why do you care the real me would scare you you would say im crazy and put me away but i wouldnt care it would get me away from you would you still visit me? i dont care i dont hate you but i dont love any one any more so leave me be and get away from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 A dream can be both death and bliss, but most of all a escape. True, a dream may be what it wants nor seems. Being crazy and locked away would make them wander, but make the person glade that their loced away from all the others. Then wanting to know if the truly care or not. It's great. ^^ I love it Because that's how I feel a lot of times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 16, 2003 Author Share Posted July 16, 2003 [color=silver]silver roots rip though my body but you scorn me for surviveing the pain you put me though i [i]hate[/i] you but you care not you keep draging me back to you but i want to get away i run and run only to be tripped by you i... you.... darkness pain hate shadows bliss death i... i don't know whats going on you seem to have just killed me but im still alive i am confused never leaving this darkness again i guess so stay away from me get away i [I]HATE[/i] you get going away from me stay away please please just leave me alone[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 Surviving pain, only to be put back in it. And being dragged back in to the darkness, not longing for light nor anything else. And wanting to be alone from hate and spite. ^^ It's great. I like the thought. Both bliss and death may be the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 16, 2003 Author Share Posted July 16, 2003 um.... right, sure what ever you want it to mean. i write to write not to convay a point. so as ive said before your guess is as good as mine. i write basicly what im feeling at that time. just wanted to clear that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 Yeah I know that, you've said that before. I told you before I'm considered crazy, plus I never said you had to say anything about it. It's only my point of view, and the only thing sane I ever do or think about is my advice So no one should really listen to me. DON'T LISTEN TO ME, alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 16, 2003 Author Share Posted July 16, 2003 [color=silver]this life seems pointless you hate me i hate my self so why live? im stuborn i think im running out of ideas happy sunshine gets in my way i spit it out in to your face i spit blood and curses al the while i see you laughing at me so i kill you ending your trivial life happyness has no place in me i have gone past the point where it matters any more i think i have a stronger will then any of you i keep my emotional pain buried but it seeps out sometimes when it does you see the real me the one who would probly kill you but i keep it hidden from you and my self so you are safe worry not my false friends my life shall end soon enough so worry not my false friends you wont have to see me again.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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